The Legend Of The Shadow

[KingKivuli]

you will have to wait. here ends part 3

part 4 coming soon

[Ushujaa]

GAHH!!! ok i feel better, still i'm looking forward to seeing what happens!

[jelle]

aww can't we get the chapter right now

[KingKivuli]

Bonus Chapter - Welcome Home

The three of them stood for a while glaring into the distance. Nothing was said, nothing was done. They all knew that chasing him would be pointless, that even if Kivuli was brought back. He might just run off again first chance. They had to accept the fact he was gone, now alone to face the wild. Time seemed to roll by slowly, neither of the trio having the urge to leave, they were all there for a reason. Kokota as a brother, Zizi his fancy and Simba his king, now wishing to seek forgiveness. All of them thought about everything that happened and all thought the same thing. That Kivuli would return and come home safe and sound

Kokota was finally the first to move up out the spot I should go. Thanks for at least letting me stay here Simba, I do appreciate it. He began to wander off, heading back to the Outlands. Simba looked at Zizi, who gave him a stern look back straight in the eyes. She didn't have to say anything, Simba knew what she was thinking Kokota wait Simba called as he stood to meet the teen lion I know what I did was too harsh, I was lost in rage at the time. I am truly sorry for what I have done, and I want you to come home, back to Priderock Kokota's face lit up with shock. He could go home, a dream he had had since exile. He accepted straight away and the three of them headed back

Simba lead the way with Kokota and Zizi behind, she talking about last night It was just amazing to see him again. And to be held like that... it just leaves me speechless. Then we just talked for hours about what has happened since you both left. What we have experienced. I was a little shocked to find that he used to stare over at Priderock every day, cause I stared over at the Outlands. Then he told me how he would sneak off to grab a kill at night, that just made me laugh. The we just talked bout the old days when the four of us played together and we didn't have a care in the world The conversation continued on. Zizi sharing her thoughts with Kokota and Kokota return the favour. They stopped when they reached the foot of piderock

Kokota stood stiff. This was it, he was home. All his friends, he had missed so much just steps away, yet without his brother it still felt a little empty. His chain of thought was broken when he heard yelling OH MY GOD! KOKOTA ITS YOU!!!!!!! It was Ashur, charging down the slopes of Priderock before pouncing and giving Kokota a big hug God I've missed you so much Kokota heaved Ashur off, having trouble breathing Good to see you too Ashur was near bouncing around, and asked about Kivuli and why Kokota was back. Kokota and Zizi explained everything that happened, and Ashur's face grew dim He's really gone? Kokota responded with a slow nod

The trio embraced each other, and started head up to the main den. As they entered two more faces appeared, Sarabi and Nala. Sarabi went to Kokota and Nala to Zizi and in turn hugged them as their own children Kokota it is so good to see you alive and well Sarabi said in a warm tone Simba just told us what happened Added Nala If you need anything just ask us ok? But for now welcome home, we missed you

Kokota let out a weak smile and started head off, up one of the slopes of pride rock to the top. As ever Ashur and Zizi quickly followed him. Once at the top they faced west, the direction Kivuli had ran. For hours they sat, staring, hoping, praying. Evening was setting in. Like the morning of that day the sky began to change. The sun setting in Kivuli's direction, taking all of its radiant colours and revealed the blanket of stars to the east which began covering the sky. Eventually Simba joined them. Followed by Nala, Sarabi, and even Sarafina.

Each one of these lions and lionesses had a major influence on Kivuli. They all wished to pay respect. Kokota was the one who started. Letting out a loud roar which echoed over the lands. Everyone joined in, for a rush of three loud roars in honor of their lost friend. The elder lions left without saying a word. Ashur also moved away leaving Zizi and Kokota to stare into the distance. They were not leaving that spot. Not any time soon

[KopsTheTerminator]

I must say that you're a really good writer, how the hell do you manage to get over that nasty writer's block? Anyway, I love the story so far! I wonder where is Kivuli heading to.. Looking forward for the next chapter!

[LilTiger]

cool story bro
LOL jk, but seriously, it's epic <3

[KingKivuli]

Part 4 - The Dark Rogue


The Days of Solitude

Kivuli kept running. The sun beginning to now rise high in the sky. He imagined what Zizi would be doing right now as his paw patted the ground with each step, taking him further away. He couldn't bare the thought, so locked it away out of his mind and focused on heading forward, towards the mountains, that was his final goal. A few hours rolled on by and Kivuli had made it to the very limits of the western boarder. It was a small cliff drop, easy to survive it leading out from dusty rocks and into more open plains. He jumped down and ran again. Kivuli didn't know where he was going exactly only that he wanted to reach those mountains. Another good few hours running had brought Kivuli into the heart of the vast plain. The evening chill was setting in and Kivuli decided it was best to call it a day. He found a small nearby umbrella tree, to which he he curled up under for the night

Another day came like many before it bringing clear skies and radiant colours. As the day broke so did Kivuli's sleep. Oddly enough he felt fine and ready to continue on, all he needed was a quick drink and he would be set. He stretched out his body and let our a small roar before looking round the nearby area. For such a large open space, there was not much in it. Most was just open grass plains, sparse of any trees or rocks at all. He looked up to follow the sound of bird chirping in the sky, heading south west. Kivuli followed them. Only five minutes into the walk did Kivuli see why the lands were so empty of life. It was all gathered round a large water hole. Kivuli smiled a little and headed towards it

As he drew closer, some of the animals noticed him. Whispers ran through the herds. No lions owned this land, so few had seen a live one, but they knew stories and knew Kivuli could be a threat. Some instantly ran for it not taking any chances, the rest stayed and watched as this lion came closer. When Kivuli was almost there, they parted to the side, giving him access to the water. Kivuli padded over to the edge looking at his reflection before turning round and addressing the herd with command in his voice Do not stop for me, just return to whatever it is you all do.. unless you want to become dinner A few more scatter while the rest continued on. They gossiped drank and bathed in the water, a morning ritual for these herds. No sooner had Kivuli arrived, he had taken his fill and left once more

The rest of the day just rolled on, over the plains, over nothing. Towards the evening Kivuli felt a change under his paws. He was no longer on grass but sand. He had hit a desert. Looking back he saw the grassy landscape fading into the dusty waste he stood on and just infront of him was another small cliff, looking over the vast wasteland infront. In the far distance Kivuli could see the mountains. Closer still, yet so very far. Not having the heart or energy to continue he looked round for some where to sleep. There was nothing, no shelter. Kivuli shrugged then just curled up where he lay to sleep

Another dawn another run. Kivuli was already at it before the sun blessed the world. The howling winds of the desert had woke him early, not giving his body time to actually rest, and he felt it. His muscles crying in pain and joints seemingly creaking at each stride, but he wouldn't stop. Kivuli just kept pushing harder and harder, but it was no use. The strain was catching up to him. In the middle of the day when the heat was at it most intense, his body gave in and collapsed. He didn't know how long he was there, only that he kept drifting in an out of conciousness. It lasted a full day

Eventually he was found, three strangers walked up and inspected him He is alive but barely, he is going to need help. Lets get him out of here Kivuli stirred from slumber at the sound of the voice. It was powerful and strong. Yet his body was shot he couldn't move a muscle. He felt himself being picked up onto someone's back then jogging through the heat. Kivuli for once feared for his life. Then for a moment, for some reason, he blocked it, cast fear away, before fainting out once more

[AustralianChaos]

Ooooh...very nice chapter, and a good cliffhanger ending to it, too.

As always, I'm hooked, and eager for more. Excellent work!

[Simbaholikov]

Alright, i've read the whole thing so far like I said I would.
Keep it up! Can't wait for more!

[FlipMode]

I only read the first chapter so far, I will read it bit by bit over due time though ! :) It was great so far .