The Legend Of The Shadow

Re: The Legend Of The Shadow

Postby KingKivuli » July 20th, 2010, 1:39 am

Twilight Embrace

As soon as Kivuli dashed away from Zizi he felt a little guilty leaving her in such a way, but he had to otherwise they both would have been in huge trouble. Still he had to make sure she would be fine. There was a nearby ditch that was just big enough for Kivuli to duck into and watch the situation with Simba and Zizi. He jumped straight in and looked over. His heart was pounding. He had no idea if Zizi would help him or not. All he could do was just watch and wait to see what happened 'Please Zi, don't give me up.....don't give me up'. His head was buzzing and heart rate increasing. It was now or never

To his relief, Kivuli watched as Simba and the pride turned and walked away. Taking a deep breath he started a slow and steady run back to the outlands. The night was really beginning to set in. The sun was going down and the stars began to twinkle in the east while it faded to a gentle orange in the west as the sun began its final decent behind the horizon. Kivuli thoughts were still currently on Zizi and how he had just ran off 'Zi....I am so sorry. I wanted to hold you and smile with you one last time before I had to go. I just couldn't. You don't need the danger of the life I now live. I just wish there was a way to show you I do still care even after whats happened'

Kivuli slowed his pace. He was nearing the river crossed into the outlands and the tree that spanned the gap. He carefully made his way across, and no sooner had he stepped foot on the broken ground, did he hear a call from behind him 'KIVULI!!' He jumped on the spot and looked back to see who it was. Sure enough it was Zizi, she had caught up to him. For a moment the both of them did nothing but stare at each other. They had both changed so much in such a short time but still had the feelings and bonds that had grown between them all those months ago. Throwing any caution to the wind Kivuli walked back over to see her

The grey beast walked towards her with a smile and when he got close enough, they embraced each other and nuzzled 'What are you doing here?' asked Kivuli in a very concerned tone 'If Simba finds you we are both in danger' Zizi nuzzled deeper into him and let a few tears out 'I don't care. What he did to you and your brother is wrong, I just cant do anything about it. Your the greatest friend I ever had and I'm not going to let anyone separate us' They embraced once more before headed a little out the way to a nearby tree to relax. Kivuli lay down first and Zizi lay next to him and snuggled into his side

'I'm sorry I ran off like that' He apologised 'I didn't want to cause you any danger' Zizi just smiled at him 'I don't blame you, I'm just glad your here now, I have missed you so much, I couldn't just let you run away without seeing you once more' Kivuli wrapped his paw round her and nuzzled 'So... erm.... hows life been here since I left' asked Kivuli hesitantly. Zizi shrugged '[b]Boring if I'm honest. I know I have Ashur but you and your brother made it for us really. Then there's the boring old hunting lessons, I swear sometimes my mom drives me crazy with it all.

The two of them just sat for a while under the starry sky exchanging the life stories. Zizi went on about, how she and Ashur adapted without their friends, the pride reaction to Zira and her gang and of course the recent birth of the new princess. Kivuli in turn told her of the outlands. How Zira brutally trained everyone except Kivuli who did it by himself and how he and Kokota would hunt at night to keep healthy and strong. Finally of course Kivuli mentioned his plan to one day attack and kill Simba for revenge

Zizi looked at him with sorrowful eyes 'Kivuli....don't kill him please... at least.. try not to please. He has been a good father to me, I'd rather not see him go. I do want to be with you but... just don't kill if you can avoid it please' Kivuli sighed and looked at the ground. Killing Simba was his goal, but at the cost of upsetting Zizi? He didn't know if he could do it. This wasn't a decision he could just jump into 'Ok, I won't aim to just kill him' Zizi's eyes lit up as she licked his muzzle. Kivuli knew that it was a lie though. The truth was he couldn't decide all he could do is keep her happy, for now that was enough

It was starting to get late. The sun had been taken by horizon and replaced by an half moon that illuminated the grassy plains along with the stars of the great kings, sparkling in the night. Zizi rose up and smiled warmly 'I should get going. Thank you Kivuli for all this. Maybe we can see each other again' She said no more and began walking off. Kivuli jumped up 'Hey wait' Zizi turned her head to face her friend 'Come back here. Tomorrow. This doesn't have to be good bye' Once again her eyes lit up. Kivuli wanted to keep seeing her and she was more than happy to accept the offer. Both said their good nights and parted ways. Little did they know however, Vitani, who just exploring the area, caught sight of the incident and ran back to inform Zira
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Re: The Legend Of The Shadow

Postby KiarasMate » July 20th, 2010, 1:58 am

Aww. ^^ Cute chapter here KK. :) My usual compliments and gripes as always. lol. Keep up the awesome work buddy. ^^
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Re: The Legend Of The Shadow

Postby KingKivuli » August 26th, 2010, 9:48 am

Witch Of The Damned

A new day dawned in the outlands, once again greeting it with a barren desert and crimson sky. The outsiders were waking up. All but one had slept that night. Kivuli had remained awake, sitting in his normal spot, onto pthe main den, to look at the view into the pridelands. His mind was set on Zizi, and his actions had not gone un noticed by his brother, Kokota, who by this time was making his way up to greet Kivuli

Hey Kivuli, you ahve been staring over there all night, you ok A joyful grin broke out on Kivuli's face as he lay down and looked out Just last night. I saw Zi while coming back from the Pridelands. Shes grown up to be a beautiful lioness and she still has a way to go, she is so amazing Kokota could tell from Kivuli's voice he was clearly lost with her on his mind. Infact it sent the under brother into laughter at the thought of it

Well I never. The all powerful King Kivuli of the Pridelands turned to mush by the thought of his little fancy haha Kokota's voice was highly playful, but also slightly mocking. Kivuli jumped and pinned his brother down Now now dont get ahead of yourself, no lady shall ever get the best of me! Both of them broke out into fits of laughter, but as usual in the outlands what happiness there was, was extinguished fast KIVULI!!! Yelled Zira form below

The great lion let of a deep growl, and in a few well timed and placed jumps, made it to the bottom. No sooner had his feet touched down, did Zira swing at him with all her might. Her paw landed a hard blow to Kivuli on the right side of the face and knocked him over before he even had a chance to get his footing What do you think you are doing, hanging around with one of those flithy pridelanders!? You know the rules of this pride and the punishment!

Kivuli slowly got up hanging his head snarling through his teeth to speak How dare you even suggest that I would follow the rule of the queen of the one who killed my mother, but also the one who got my exiled. I may live here in this flith with you but.... Kivuli raised his head. His scars on his left eye were now joined by a pair on his right cheek. As blood dripped onto the dusty earth, Kivuli's eyes were set on fire ....I AM NOT PART OF YOUR PRIDE!!!

Kivuli charged full on into Zira, quickly knocking her down and then beginning to sink into her ear. He was not trying to kill her, only take 'an eye for an eye' as it were. She had made him lose flesh and he was about to do the same. Only the flesh he ripped off was a sizeable chunk fo Zira's ear causing her to yell in pain. She kicked him off, ear bleeding and staring him down. Kivuli looked back, muzzzle covered in a light layer of blood as he spat out the flesh he had taken. All the noise had caused the Outlanders to gather. Most of them were cheering on Zira while others waited for the blood bath that was sure to come

And come it did, with full fury when both felines charged full pelt at each other. The battle waged on for a good thirty minutes, neither showing signs of giving up, but both wearing out and they knew it. There was almsot silence in the outlands as the pair stared each other down for one final assult. Kokota had made his way down and into the front to support Kivuli, while Nuka, Vitani and Kovu stood on Zira's side. It was time, both of them charged full on and clashed in the middle. They were sent back by flying by the force they dealt each other and knocked over. Kokota ran to Kivuli, asn the 3 cubs joined Zira as both fighters rose up

They were both out of it completly. Kivuli could have taken her down but with little sleep it wasnt easy. They exchange glances as Kivuli raised his paw to point at Zira This maybe over for now, but mark my words Zira. I will come for you like I came for Scar, and that happens I wont hold back. See you in hell, Witch of the Damned! With that Kivuli strided off holding his head high and proud as Zira was gasping for air.

Once Kivuli was out of site and alone with Kokota, he collapsed to rest Kivuli! Are you ok?! Kokota was concerned, and with reason, that fight had indeed taken its toll on Kivuli Im fine brother, Im fine. I know now what I must do...
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Re: The Legend Of The Shadow

Postby Darkstride » September 21st, 2010, 10:37 pm

woah...kiv.... thats deep man, and a little scary

btw chek u spelling you made a good few errors in there
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Re: The Legend Of The Shadow

Postby KingKivuli » September 30th, 2010, 1:10 pm

Alone at Last

As the day rolled on, both Kivuli and Zira recovered from the battle. Both left a scar on their rival that would last for eternity. The night was beginning to set in and near the boarders of the Outlands, Kivuli began to make his way to the Pridelands, hoping to see Zizi once again. He was stopped however by a familiar voice Bit dangerous heading back there isn't it? It was Kokota who had followed him from the dusty lands It's a risk I'm willing to take brother, she is worth seeing again, I have missed her

As have I Kivuli but your taking a huge risk if you get caught, your dead, but I guess you already made up your mind Kivuli walked back over to his sibling and nuzzled him. If I don't return just remember me ok? And our mother. Kokota wrapped his paws round Kivuli hugging him, not letting go Great Kings Kivuli, please just be safe The elder brother smiled warmly Hey it's me, you know I never play safe The two of them laughed a little before looking at each other I love you Kivuli, please don't leave me alone in this world A small sadness formed in Kivuli's heart at the thought of his bother being alone I love you too bro and I'm not going anywhere After a long hug they parted ways. Little did Kokota know of his brothers true intentions

Kivuli's crossing into the Pridelands was easy. Simba's patrol was quite sloppy and easy to dodge If that's the best he has he should be ashamed Thought Kivuli, as he waited on a small hill, looking out for Zizi. Normally lions would be spotted instantly but with Kivuli's dark fur, blending into the settling night, it was the perfect camouflage. Time ticked by, he didn't know how long, he didn't care. Finally after what seemed like an age, she came into sight, unaware he was watching, she padded on forward head straight to him

Kivuli struck a grin. He was in playful mood and was going to use this advantage well. He lay low and waited till she drew closer and closer until she was in range. On the count of 3 in Kivuli's head he leapt out onto her, pinning her gently, and putting his paw over her muzzle in-case she screamed, but she didn't. She knew it was him the moment he touched her. The look in her eyes said it all. He removed his paw and bent down to nuzzle her Oh Zi its good to see you, I've missed you so much Zizi returned the nuzzle and hugged him I've missed you too They lay there for a moment enjoying each others embrace before Kivuli got up We should move somewhere, so we wont get spotted zizi giggled and rose to her paws I know a place follow me She lead the way and Kivuli was right behind

After a brisk walk Kivuli found himself near the boarders of Pridelands, leading towards the mountains in the distance. Nearby was a large umbrella tree, exactly where Zizi was heading. She walked over and lay down under it. Kivuli was more than happy to join in and lay down next to her. Without missing a heartbeat, she snuggled into Kivuli for warmth and comfort This is where I always came if I needed to think. Father doesn't know about it, good thing too or you would be in trouble Kivuli laughed it off I'm not the only one that would be Zizi gave him the raised eyebrow look Hmm the worst I would get is confined to den. YOU would be killed

I'd like to see him try it Kivuli said with a smug look on his face, as he lay his head on hers to enjoy the evening So what is life like out there Kivu? I'm curious Kivuli looked into her eyes, and knew this would be a long night. Although he explained everything before, he did so again. How he stood out of Zira's way, the planned attack, how he hunted his own food. The fight against Zira, and of course the feelings he had being separated from his friends. Zizi in turn told her tale once more. The long months of grief she felt, how Ashur had look after her. The announcement of Kiara's arrival. How Zizi was becoming a great huntress, even if she was a little clumsy.

The two of them sat up late into the night before falling asleep in each others paws. They were glad to be with each other at least 1 last time
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Re: The Legend Of The Shadow

Postby AustralianChaos » September 30th, 2010, 1:19 pm

the story continues on...and I'm loving every work of it!

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Re: The Legend Of The Shadow

Postby Ushujaa » September 30th, 2010, 1:22 pm

just read the most recent chapters and i can't wait to see what happens next!
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Re: The Legend Of The Shadow

Postby KingKivuli » September 30th, 2010, 11:03 pm

Goodbye My Brother, Goodbye My Friend

Dawn was approaching. The first glimmer of light took over the sky, mixing with the remaining stars. The countless birds began their song. No surprise it woke up Kivuli having not heard it in so long. It didn't bother him too much though, this was just the break he needed. Slowly but surely he rose up, making sure not to wake Zizi. Once he was out he looked over at the mountains. If he was going through with his plan it would have to be now. Next to Zizi he planted two paw prints in the ground and then set her paws in them Zi, I'm sorry for doing this but I feel in my heart I have no choice. I don't know where life will take me from here but I know one day I will return. So long and rest easy He licked her forehead and then darted off to the horizon, leaving his life behind

A few more hours rolled by. Zizi was waking up, taking a moment to remember what went on. Then she remembered, springing her head up to look round Kivuli? You here? KIVULI!? She looked down, seeing the paw prints then the direction they faced, the mountains. It suddenly hit her, he was gone, just like that to the wild. Tears began forming in her eyes. As soon as she had him back he went again. The peace of the morning was broken and now she wasn't alone Zi? She swung round to see the face of Kokota You ok what happened? She pounced on him to hug him tight Kivuli....he.... he's gone! Tears poured from her eyes like the raging waterfalls soaking both Kokota and the ground below Kiv....why... Kokota himself began to shead tears

Zi! There you are Both teens looked up in fear, Simba had found them KOKOTA!! What are you doing here? And with my daughter!! Kokota stood strong, even through the tears he wasnt afraid not now not ever again I was doing nothing! And I think you should concentrate on more important things, like your daughter Zizi was on the floor, face in paws crying like no tomorrow Zi.... what's wrong? She came over and nuzzled her father Daddy...it's Kivuli... he's gone... No more was said. Simba knew what had happened, and now felt a all too familiar chill down his spine Kivuli... You ran off, alone, no family now no life. Just like I was. Maybe I was too harsh on you. Just be safe wherever you go, by the great kings, and your mother, watch over you
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Re: The Legend Of The Shadow

Postby AustralianChaos » October 1st, 2010, 1:43 am

another excellent chapter...it look like Simba might finally be seeing what he's done...

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Re: The Legend Of The Shadow

Postby Ushujaa » October 1st, 2010, 1:43 am

i honestly can't wait to see where kivuli ran off to! the suspense!
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