Chosen One: As The New King

[Nightstar75]

Ok, so I wanna start writing my fanfic. Mine is about, well, what if Kovu wasn't the chosen one? What if Nuka was, like he wanted to be? I wanna start out from the VERY beginning, then work my way up.

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Prelude

Kovu's P.O.V.

Hmph. This isn't fair. I'm MUCH more talented and smarter than that flea bag I call an older brother, but no. Scar picked HIM over ME. So what? He IS the older brother I can see, but he has no brains in his head. And he seems... well... I'm not sure how to say. Out of it? Insane? Something mental I would say. And still, all I can say is hmph to this. I deem this as unfair so far. And how quickly irratably this has become. Day by day, watching as mother pays only attention to Nuka, not me, or Vitani. But this doesn't bother Vitani, she looks up to her Aniki. Mom always glares at me if I don't respect him, so I have to. Oh well, one day, when he's is dead, I will be King! And not that flea ball...

As I get up, I look around our home. Flithy. Its such a barren terrain here, I long to be home as mother calls it. She always tells Vitani and I, one day when Nuka is king, we will live at Pride Rock, and everything will be lovely and, well, not termite infested. This, I guess, is an upside. But still, no way will I let Nuka rule.

Speak of the horrible one himself. Across the horizon, I can see Nuka walking over to me himself.

Ughh, Chosen One...

"Mother tells me it's bedtime now. You should get some sleep lil Otoutu." Nuka had a smile on his face, a warm one at that. But his smiles have gotten on my nerves by now, I despite seeing them, loathe them at that. I huff, and walk on without Nuka towards our home without a word in mind outloud, but so much to think about. Only a few more days before Nuka is sent off to start this mission... or plan, whichever, of mothers. Where, he becomes... king...

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Ok, that's all I got so far. This takes place, when Kovu and Vitani are in their teenage years. I shall try to write more. Let me know if you like it.

[KiarasMate]

This sounds like a really fresh and interesting idea you have here Kirstin. ^^ It's a great start and I like the first person perspective from Kovu and of course, your writing is very well thought out. I honestly wouldn't expect anything less from your writing, than I do of your AMVs, so I'm not really surprised that you're just as talented with Fan Fic writing. Looking forward to reading more and I honestly don't really have any constructive criticism...yet at least. hehe.

[SarabisMate]

nice piece of work here Nightstar....I really do look forward to new writings soon

[KopsTheTerminator]

Lmao, I have a RP like this is SM's forum. But that's a pretty good fan-fic so far! ''lil Otoutu'' XD

[Nightstar75]

KiarasMate: Hehe, thankyou. I've never really written fanfic... I have I'm good at it. Thanks for the support. :3

RKLE: Thanks

Kopa23: Oh nu! I'm sorry! Did I steal your idea?! Please forgive me... Lol. And yesh, lil Otouto. I'm sorry, gotta use some kinda Japanese in here. Eheh

NOTE: I'll write more when I get home. By the way, I forgot to mention this. >.>

Aniki = Fancy way of saying "Older Brother"
Otouto = Younger Brother

Thats all.

[KopsTheTerminator]

Not really, the idea is TOTALLY different than yours. Because Simba has Chaka, Shani and Kopa and Nuka falls in love with Shani. Oh, and Kopa falls in love with Vitani. Chaka doesn't have a girlfriend. lol

Edit: I've watched Digimon Data Squad/Savers on Japanese (with English subtitles) and I think Aniki means boss in Japanese. Might be wrong through. XD

[Nightstar75]

Dude, I wrote something to follow this up a while back >.> It never posted...=_= Oh well. Lol.
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Lol, from the Japanese I know, Aniki means Elder Brother. XP Lol. You can look it up if you want. ^^'''

Ok, I shal continue this, I hope this works.

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Prelude [Continued]

As I lay awake in bed at night, I can't sleep. I haven't been sleeping much anyways. Whats the point? I have nothing to do. Mother pays no heed to me, its like I don't exist. And if I do ever exist in her eyes, its always a scowlding I get. Still I love her, and I wish to please her in every way I can. Show Mother I can be great too. Well, as I lay here in my insomnia-like state, I can help but think deeply in my thoughts. As a young teen, maybe I shouldn't be thinking so profoundly, I'm not all too sure. It doesn't matter, the only thing I'm concerned about, is what will happen to me later on in life. Sure, if my brother is king, what will that make me? And will I finally get to be king when he is gone? I don't wanna be like Scar, killing my brother to be king. I just want to be noticed.

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I still remember that night, as it was clear to me.

Years later, I'm sitting in some room. I remember this room as a little cub, but now it looks bigger. Its time for Nuka to leave and go to the Pridelands, and I have to watch Zira talk to Nuka as a re-cap of everything. Or at least it seems so. As she begins, I can't help but think to myself.

"Nice... Very... Nice... You have the same blackness in your soul that Scar had."

That should be me up there.

"What is your destiny?"
"I will avenge Scar... Take his place in the Pridelands."

As KING. Which should be MY job.

"Yes! What have I taught you?"
"Simba is the enemy..."

He should be MY enemy, and MY target.

"And what, must, you, do?"
"I must kill him..."

The roars of every lioness filled the room, well, all except mine. I refuse to roar for Nuka. Stupid older brother. As I sit in a boney silence, I can feel the glare of my mother apon me. It hit me hard and I never felt so horrid. I didn't even try to roar then. It didn't matter. She didn't like me, and she never would. I saw it this way. But I still wanted to please her. This is where my it has to matter most though.
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Ok XD That ends meh prelude. ^^ I'll get started on the story later. X3

[shadowdream]

so far its really good and i cant wait to read more

[KiarasMate]

Nice conclusion to the prelude Kirstin. this seems like it will be quite the interesting story to follow and I look forward to reading the rest as you write it my friend. Keep up the awesome work and I'll let you know if I find anything to critique on as your story progresses. ^^

[CheetahCat]

I actually got around of reading more of your prelude Kirstin and I must say, I'm honestly am looking forward of seeing more of your story in the future. Keep up the fabulous work my lioness friend. ^^