The Legend Of The Shadow

Re: The Legend Of The Shadow

Postby KingKivuli » November 4th, 2009, 12:07 am

The Battle Ends

As Priderock burned, a battle had begun for the future of the Pridelands. The true kings return inspired the lionesses to finally fight back. It soon became clear that the hyenas were sloppy push overs. In high numbers they can over run one or two who got in their way, but against a full pride with fire in their hearts and a kings leadership was too powerful. The hyenas tried to all charge Simba in the hopes of killing him and taking control again. The lionesses were too quick to act in order to save the king. As the fight raged on more and more hyena's fell. Kivuli, Kokota and Ashur drew ever more closer to the battle and were ready to fight

The three adolescents ran up the slopes of Priderock, knocking fleeing hyenas away, in order to join the battle above. When they arrived there was still a lot of fighting to be done. The three split off in separate directions. Kivuli went round the side. He could hear a lion roar nearby. As Kivuli looked round a golden lion caught his eyes 'That must be Simba' he thought 'I thought it was odd seeing the lionesses fight. His return must of sparked off a rebellion. Guess I won't be king. Unless Simba dies. No matter that can wait I need to find Sarabi'

Kivuli looked round as fast as he could. Eventually, through the intense heat and ash that seemed to rival the sun, Kivuli saw the widow queen getting backed into a corner by hyenas. Without thinking Kivuli charged. Instantly two hyenas were knocked down, and Kivuli stood in front of Sarabi, fang and claw draw and ready 'Kivuli! Thank god you made it. Where are the others?' she asked 'Fighting. Go to them Sarabi, these beasts are mine' replied Kivuli. The old queen obeyed and ran leaving Kivuli alone. The hyenas went for the gray lion. A bad move. The training had worked. Kivuli moved so fast with such deadly force, they hyenas stood no chance as their bodies piled up, each dieing with but one deadly swing of Kivuli's paw

Sarabi was making her way up to where Simba had begun the battle with Scar when she turned round to see Kivuli at his full potential. She was amazed at the sight, unable to break her stare on the battle, she watched as Kivuli lay waste from one hyena to the next. How their blood began to cover the floor, and Kivuli, in a blanket of crimson liquid. Sarabi lost herself in her thoughts 'Kivuli. You're incredible. From the way you fight you could even take on my son with a chance of victory. But, I know you wont. Your heart wont allow it. Past the anger and hate you have, I know deep down your the most gentle, caring lion that can be known. You would have made a great king for us all. I'm proud of you. I know you mother would be to. No matter what happens Kivuli. You will always be a king in my eyes' Sarabi then ran off to join the end of the battle, only to find that there was only one remaining. The battle of the kings

Kivuli stood his ground. Waiting for the next lot of hyenas. He was distracted however when small rocks fell and rolled off his blood matted skin. Wondering what was going on he looked up and gasped. Scar was falling. Acting quick Kivuli jumped out the way and ran to a rock for nearby cover, ready to finished the job. He didn't get the chance. The hyenas were surrounding Scar and and advancing. Kivuli chuckled as he heard the tyrant plead for mercy before the hyenas tore into him and the flames engulfed the hyenas along with Scar. Kivuli never took his eyes off it. Even though he never did it himself. He was happy. Scar was finally dead
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Re: The Legend Of The Shadow

Postby KiarasMate » November 4th, 2009, 12:18 am

Aww. :( All that training, and all Kivuli gets to bring down are a few mangy hyenas? lol. :) Well, I smell a plot twist coming up, perhaps, unless I'm wrong like I was before, but yeah, awesome new part as always KK. ^^ Looking forward to the nexst installment of your epic story. :)
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Re: The Legend Of The Shadow

Postby KingKivuli » November 4th, 2009, 12:22 am

hey he took down alot of hyenas with style, so did ashur and kokota but this is not their story lol sorry to disappoint KM but i dont see any major plot twists coming.... yet maybe idk yet. butt i can assure everyone. kivuli's story has only began
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Re: The Legend Of The Shadow

Postby SimbasMate » November 4th, 2009, 12:27 am

STUPID HYENAS. I thought Kivuli was stronger than that. lol Great new chapter, Connor. Looking forward to the next one! :D
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Re: The Legend Of The Shadow

Postby KiarasMate » November 4th, 2009, 12:29 am

*shakes a paw at KK*

You should have just kept me guessing KK. lol. :) Oh well. Your story is intriguing enough to keep me reading on without the prospects of any plot twists, so I guess it's okay. lol. :) Anyways, keep up the fantastic work buddy. ^^
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Re: The Legend Of The Shadow

Postby Mike » November 4th, 2009, 12:59 am

I'm glad you stayed faithful to the plot ;) I like how it's going now, because Kivuli's story is only just beginning now.
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Re: The Legend Of The Shadow

Postby KingKivuli » November 4th, 2009, 1:03 am

Mother of Two Kings

The battle was over. Rain had finally began to fall over the Pridelands, washing away all the death, blood and destruction left by Scar, and cleaning the path for the new king. Simba. While the new king was being greeted by his pride, Kivuli stood up above watching the proceedings. The same spot as Scar saw Simba return. Ashur and Kokota came either side of him and looked down below. The three were still covered in blood and marks from fangs and claws 'We did it bro' said Kokota 'Yes we did. We can finally have peace' replied Kivuli 'Now what do we do? Your not going to be king Kivuli. Simba is' inquired Ashur 'Just live our lives I guess. I'm just glad we saw this through' Kivuli looked into the eyes of his brother and friend. Each one smiling as they watched the king rise up Priderock

After a brief moment reflection Simba let out a mighty roar, which spread across the lands. The lionesses that looked up to the king responded with a combined roar back in acceptance of him. As Simba let out a second roar Kivuli, Kokota and Ashur looked at each other and nodded. Together they let out roars that were second to non against Simba's. The noise attracted the attention of everyone including Simba. Sarabi and Sarafina looked up with happiness in their eyes, at the three lions who had cared for them. Now standing proud and strong, and willing to serve the true king. Sarafina whispered to Sarabi 'Hey from here, doesn't it look like...' Sarabi interrupted 'I know. I know' The widows thoughts turned back to the fight and of Kivuli's mother briefly 'It's as i said before Kivuli. You are a king no matter what'
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Re: The Legend Of The Shadow

Postby KiarasMate » November 4th, 2009, 1:37 am

Wow, two parts in one day. lol. :) Well, very nice short add on to your story KK. ^^ Can't really say much more on this part, other than, Sarafini? lol. :)
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Re: The Legend Of The Shadow

Postby KingKivuli » November 4th, 2009, 1:44 am

oh bugger did i do that again *edits* there! :D

so now a few quick facts about the fan fic so far :P

15 chapters, 288 paragraphs, 9659 words

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Re: The Legend Of The Shadow

Postby KiarasMate » November 4th, 2009, 1:51 am

lol, I thought it was a new cross breed of lioness. Sarafina + Vitani. :) Voiced by Zoe Lien or Jennifer Leader. lol. ^^
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