The Fallen Prince: Nuka's Renewal (Part 1 of TFP)

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OK people! Lets sit down and do this next chapter

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Chapter Nine

Nuka sat in his corner, away from the two cubs, each in their own makeshift holding pen. He was beaming with joy, enthralled at the fact that Mother had aknowledged him. For once, he had done something right! He couldent stand it. Laying there, he closed his eyes, thinking about what could possibly happen to him. Maybe mother would finally recognize him as the true chosen one! Maybe he would have the honor of being the king! Thinking these thoughts, he soon fell asleep, forgetting about the cubs.

Vitani, peering around the corner, noticed that Nuka was asleep. After a few minutes she decided it was safe, so she ran over to the two cages and slipped to Kopas. Working her claw at the reeds Nuka had used to secure it closed, Kopa looked at her. "What do you want, Outlander." Kopa said coldly.

Vitani raised an eyebrow, yet kept to working the reeds out. She finally popped them out and tore down the makeshift walls.

"I said, what are you doing, outlander." Kopa said, staying put. Vitani, meanwhile, rushed into the cage, now torn down, and pulled Kopa into an embrace.

"K..Kopa..." she sobbed. "I missed you so much!" she leaned awkwardly on his shoulder, sobbing into his fur as he looked at her oddly.

"Who are you!" he exclaimed.

"You've... forgotten... havent you." she said. " Remember?" she put her 4th claw up to his, wrapping it around his. "Lets cherish each other, forever." she said, quoting him.

Kopa cocked his head. That voice was definitly familiar. He shook his head all the same. "Ok," Vitani said. "I'll let you figure it out." she stepped back. "Your free to go. No strings attatched. That that way," she said, indicating the rocks behind her. "Take your sister as well. You'll remember me one day," she said.

Kopa nodded, wide eyed as this she-cub that seemed to know everything about him let him free. Himself and Kiara ran for pride rock. When they reached home, neither of them spoke a word to Simba.

With tears in her eyes, Vitani curled up against Nuka, who, not even noticing her, pulled her closer. He was overjoyed still, imagining it was Zira. Sobbing, Vitani fell asleep.

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Chapter Finished and LIVE!

[CommandoTheLion]

Love your story xD dont say its crap coz its not I LOVE your story xD
you got awesome Writing skills that i dont have =/

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C'mon now. Its not THAT good...

[CommandoTheLion]

[quote="NukaKun"]C'mon now. Its not THAT good...[/quote]

you kidding =O I really love your Story xD its awesome xD

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You makin me blush...

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Heads up, I've set my vote!

[CommandoTheLion]

[quote="NukaKun"]You makin me blush... [/quote]

Ummm Ok O.o lol

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Chaps 10-12 will be out today, I'm off school ^_^