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That's very ashameful for this saga to be so overatted, yet the author broke the biggest rule in literature. Also, I found out that Stephanie Meyer was too afraid to read horror novels, didn't read vampire novels, and she lacked the research of vampires and the Great Depression. Pathetic writer.
If you don't mind me asking, what's the 'Show, don't tell' rule?
Hope I'm not a bother ^.^
I think what SimbaObsesser is trying to say is that Twilight tells it like "Bella ran over to Edward." instead of "Bella dashed vigorously in pursuit of Edward." Bella tells what is happening to her instead of explaining to the reader what is happening to her. Like she is not showing the reader with her words, but merely flat out telling you what is happening with little description.





















































Tora wrote:Kopalover wrote:SimbaObsesser wrote:Also, Twilight breaks the biggest rule in writing: Show, don't tell.
That's very ashameful for this saga to be so overatted, yet the author broke the biggest rule in literature. Also, I found out that Stephanie Meyer was too afraid to read horror novels, didn't read vampire novels, and she lacked the research of vampires and the Great Depression. Pathetic writer.
If you don't mind me asking, what's the 'Show, don't tell' rule?
Hope I'm not a bother ^.^
I think what SimbaObsesser is trying to say is that Twilight tells it like "Bella ran over to Edward." instead of "Bella dashed vigorously in pursuit of Edward." Bella tells what is happening to her instead of explaining to the reader what is happening to her. Like she is not showing the reader with her words, but merely flat out telling you what is happening with little description.
































jelle wrote:anyone here who actually LIKES twillight?

















Shadowfax wrote:Twishite. That is all.






























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