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[Carl]

Your story? It's coming along nicely. You'll have to write more before I can say much more than it's off to a good start.
I enjoyed being your grammar Nazi.

You wanna be mine?
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[Khanu]

sure let's do this

[Carl]

That could take you a while lol

[Khanu]

I'm doing a chapter at a time, WHY does Simba need to die in your fictions? XD

[Kitva Hyperlink]

Ya i think you now will relly get the drill
kuna posted .'. i win!

[Carl]

@Kuna It's my OCs' default world! I warned you about this! Notai and Kimitar grew up without a grandpa.

Besides...
In the previous version, he and Vitani had an illegitimate child that he tried to get rid of.
I thought this preserved his character more than that did.

[Khanu]

what is the matter with you? XD can't Simba just be fine? lol but really the story is really good still you should continue it

[Carl]

Well, I told you I'm evil. I had to avenge Scar! (lol jk)
I will continue it. Eventually. It takes awhile.

[Khanu]

an illegitimate cub, how do you make that leap? lol

[Carl]

It just popped in my head one day. I drew Sky, he looked liked Vitani, and then the idea came to me to make Simba the father.
As you can see, I decided to change that.