The Legend Of The Shadow

[KiarasMate]

Another awesome part to your story here KK> ^^ You did a magnificent job on the descriptive details in this one. Really gave a clear picture of just what was going on. Can't wait to read the next part whenever you get to posting it. ^^

[Lionking012]

finally had the chance to read this part. Its going good.

[CheetahCat]

I finally was able to get through it all so far, KK.

It's really looking good and I'm anxious to see another part from you soon. ^^

[CommandoTheLion]

this is a great story cant wait till more

[KingKivuli]

Kivuli's Rage - Inner Strength

The sound of shattering bones drew closer towards the lion friends. They wondered what force could move at such a fast and destructive speed. The destructive noise fell silent. The movement of paws could be heard entering the training area. Kokota and Ashur went on guard, not knowing who it was entering the area. A figure appeared in the shadowed entrance way. Kokota and Ashur charged, preparing to strike. They stopped however when the figure came into the light. It was Kivuli. His face was washed with rage, eyes beating red. His fang were shown and claws drawn. A fearsome sight no matter how you looked at it

Recovering from the shock, Kokota realized it was his brother and smiled. It was short lived however, as Kokota noticed the anger and pain in Kivuli's eyes. 'Kivuli are you OK bro?' The gray lion ignored the question along with his brother and friend. It was almost like they never existed to him. Instead Kivuli kept walking forward till he was next to the solid wall of bone. He raised his paw and begun to swing at the skeleton, trying to break it about like the small bones they practiced on

Ashur walked over and stood right next to his friend 'Hey Kivuli, what you doing? You know its basically impossible to break those bones right?' Kivuli stopped attacking and gave Ashur a chilled look that sent shiver through his whole body. Kivuli spoke through his fangs 'Get out my way. NOW!' scared for his very life Ashur backed up to Kokota. Kivuli attacked again, this time harder and much faster. Kokota rushed to Ashur who had turned pale 'Ashur are you OK?' Kokota inquired 'Whats wrong with him.....His eyes.... So much hate....' These words left the lips of a trembling Ashur. Kokota needed to know what was going on and fast. He bean to yell at Kivuli

'Kivuli! What the hell is going on?! You just came here, scaring the life out of us, ignoring us and now you have shaken Ashur! WHATS GOING ON!?' Kokota's words only seemed to anger Kivuli was he was still hitting harder on the ribcage of the fallen elephant. Kokota began to walk over 'OK brother this has to stop rig...' He words were cut short by a loud cracking sound. Kokota and Ashur wandered what it was, then it hit them. Kivuli was doing the seemingly impossible. He was breaking the rib of the skeleton. The younger adolescents watched in amazement and fear. 'How can he be so strong' thought Kokota

For a short while it looked like the bone would not break no more. Kivuli backed off. Kokota breathed a sigh of relief 'That enough now Kivuli. Come on have something to eat' Again Kivuli ignored his brother. His paw pads were bleeding due to the fierce attacks. It didn't stop Kivuli. He charged back at the rib with all he speed and jumped in the air, coming down on it. As he collided with the smooth white surface, Kivuli used all the power he could. The bone could not withstand such a force. The top half splintered leaving the rest falling in the dust

Kivuli turned round to face his brother and friend, whose faces were in utter shock at what Kivuli had done. It was truly an incredible sight 'Get out of here, now!' Snarled Kivuli 'Kiv, aren't you going to tell us whats up?' Ashur pleaded. Kivuli was not in a talking mood. He just wanted to train. Scar had pushed him past his normal limits. He intended to use that locked in power the best he could 'I said go!' The younger lions got up and ran out of the training area. As they ran away they could hear Kivuli begin his brutal training

[SimbasMate]

Wow! I just read it in like 6 seconds... lol jk. AWESOMESAUCE CHAPTER! Keep it up!!!!!!

[CommandoTheLion]

Sweet chapter xD

[Mike]

That's classic alright It's odd to see such behavior in a TLK environment.

[KingKivuli]

put urself in kivuli's paws. you just found ur mother was mrdered when you were just a cub and the one that did it i in your reach

[KiarasMate]

Very nice new installment to your story KK. ^^ Lots of emotion running through this part and I look forward to reading what happens next. The one thing I am wondering about is if Kivuli is going to tell Kokota about what he found out, seeing as they are brothers, right? So I would think this news would impact Kokota a lot as well, but in what way, I couldn't be for certain as they are your characters. lol. Still, it will be an interesting plot twist to look forward to. ^^