Fate of the Omniverse

[Tekir]

While I have nothing against a few laws of physics being nonexistant in a story (Come on, it happens in countless stories that the physics of our world are just not there so don't act as if it had never happened), I believe that what disturb people the most here is how so many unlikely events happen in so very few sentences. That's why the story is... well... quite confusing and maybe weird lol. If the main goal of the story was to confuse the readers and give them a "What the...?!?" reaction, then it is well done. However, if that was not the goal and that you were more aiming at creating a story that would pick the interest of the readers without confusing them too much, an advice from me would be to rework that story by changing some elements to make it more "believable". =P

[KopsTheTerminator]

^ True that... I mean, you had a fairly acceptable intro, then something completely random happens and the intro is ruined. Wat.

[Vector]

I just wrote a story and all. No need to be all literal and stuff.

[Vector]

^ Please stop spamming everywhere and posting this on my topic. Seriously, what are you doing?

[Arani]

^ Vector, ignore them, they're just trolls, leave it alone the mods will handle it.

[Vector]

Guh... 2 times?

[FlipMode]

I like turtles

[MalibuTrashDog]

^ Vector, ignore them, they're just trolls, leave it alone the mods will handle it.

This is funny because 3 of the mods posted memes on here.

[NalaKiaraTani]

Cool Story Bro. I lol'd.