Fate of the Omniverse

Fate of the Omniverse

Postby Vector » March 10th, 2012, 6:22 pm

This is a short story about the fate of all of existence and nonexistence. Needless to say, it's gonna be pretty epic.

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Seattle, May 2, 9001: It is far in the future, and Earth's technology has become extremely advanced. Time travel, portals, and other futuristic things have been invented. Yukio, an 11 year old boy, was walking on the sidewalk with his twin sister Jacaranda. They were just going to an ice cream shop not far from home, and had money given to them by their parents.

"I'm so getting Chocolate Chip Cookie Dough!" Jacaranda shrieked happily.

"Well I'm getting Birthday Cake!" Yukio replied. They walked through the futuristic slider door. They paid their money to the employee and got their ice cream. Jacaranda got hers in a cone, and Yukio got his in a dish with a spoon. They walked outside to go back home, when suddenly, they heard a huge booming sound.

"What was that?" Yukio said, starting to panic.

"I don't know!" said Jacaranda, also starting to panic. Suddenly, a huge rip in space in time appeared in the sky. Yukio and Jacaranda's parents were very worried about their kids, but for some reason, they couldn't open the door because of a strange force that held it shut.

The rip sucked the ice cream inside of it. Then Yukio and Jacandra's leftover money and change, and then a couple pieces of trash littered on the ground. Yukio and Jacaranda screamed and ran away as fast as they could. The sidewalk got sucked in, then the road, then some cars, hoverboards, and motorcycles.

"RUN, YUKIO! RUN, RUN, RUN, RUN, RRRRUUUNNN!!!!!" Jacaranda yelled.

"I'm trying to!" Yukio replied. Buildings started getting sucked in, plants, people, pets, and other animals nearby. Then the force was so strong that it sucked Jacaranda and Yukio in both feetfirst. Then it started to suck in the rest of Earth. Then it sucked in the whole Solar System and other nearby stars. Then it sucked in all of the Milky Way Galaxy, then the other galaxies, then the whole universe. Then it sucked in tons of universes and multiverses. The sound was so loud, it could be heard across the whole omniverse. Then, finally, it sucked in the whole omniverse.

It was all over. All of existence and nonexistence was destroyed. Goodbye, everything ever.

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So, what do you think?
Last edited by Vector on March 10th, 2012, 11:23 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Fate of the Omniverse

Postby Jiirani » March 10th, 2012, 6:34 pm

Very nice. I think there could have been a little more description of how everything was sucked in but other than that I like the concept.
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Re: Fate of the Omniverse

Postby Vector » March 10th, 2012, 11:18 pm

I know, it's really cool. If it was ever made into a video, this would be good music for the disaster scene.

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Re: Fate of the Omniverse

Postby Panda-chan » March 11th, 2012, 10:05 pm

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Re: Fate of the Omniverse

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Re: Fate of the Omniverse

Postby Noah » March 11th, 2012, 10:24 pm

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Re: Fate of the Omniverse

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Re: Fate of the Omniverse

Postby KopsTheTerminator » March 12th, 2012, 9:34 pm

Flaw in logic: You can't hear sound in space...

If woeler posts in this, it'll be awesome.
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Re: Fate of the Omniverse

Postby Woeler » March 13th, 2012, 10:17 pm

[quote="KopsTheTerminator"]Flaw in logic: You can't hear sound in space...

If woeler posts in this, it'll be awesome.[/quote]

oh alright Kops, because you love physics so much ;)

1. you can't scream in space. Sound is a vibration traveling through matter. In space, there is no matter (well there is dark matter but little is known about this stuff) and thus there can be no sound.

2. there is no strange force keeping the door shut. It's called a vacuum.

3. as far as I know time can't rip. It can only stop and that can only happen when we go as fast as the speed of light, which is impossible. E=mc^2

4. if a human were to fly free into space without any protective gear, it would explode due to the lack of pressure on the outside.

5. There are no black holes near Earth nor are there any stars that could become a black hole.

6. the whole universe can't be sucked up by a black hole. it is ever expanding with the speed of light meaning nothing can go faster than it, not even a black hole or it's gravitational field.

7. the omniverse or the multiverse theory are complete nonsense as there is no evidence on their existance at all.

8. And IF something were to suck up your ''omniverse''. What would it be? something outside the omniverse? not possible and self contradictory.

I hope you enjoyed my fancy physics.

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Re: Fate of the Omniverse

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