The Second Scar:The Story of a What If

[LilTiger]

Simba ran down from the rocks where he saw Mufasa fall. He followed the hooves from the wildbeest. Simba coughed from the dust. "Dad?!" He kept yelling until he heard something. "Dad?" He saw a wildbeest run. Then, he saw his father's body. Simba trotted over to his father. Simba looked at his father's body. Simba tried to wake up is father. He even yelled for help. But he soon relized Mufasa was dead. Simba went under his father's paw and cried. Then, Scar came walking over. "Simba, what have you done." But Scar didn't wait for an answer. "Let's go home." Scar picked up Simba and went home to priderock.

(very long sneekv peek, please review)

[RayCat]

Wow, nice work! I really can't wait to read more! ^.^

[LilTiger]

[quote="PrincessKiara091"]Wow, nice work! I really can't wait to read more! ^.^ [/quote]
You're welcome!!

[Nukascar1]

does that mean Scar would kidda turn into the good guy for correctining his mistake

[LilTiger]

[quote="Nukascar1"]does that mean Scar would kidda turn into the good guy for correctining his mistake[/quote]
Hehe. Close..... Well, Scar....well, if I rold you it wouldn't be a suprise now would it

[Nukascar1]

if I was a lion I would be his most loaly freind if he didn't survive the attack((I like to think he did))I would make all thouse hyeans D I E

[Golionking]

When will it be done and where will it be?