[Public] 1,001 Nights (Open)

[Sixshot1988]

yea but right now I ripped something from Dragon ballZ, a parady of their Hyperbolic time chamber. It is called the Temperal Space Zone. It is where Sarabi will accerate their training, giving them years of experiance in day's time in the real world, but it is straining, in boy, mind and soul, so she has kept it's exisistance hidden until now.

[Mike0908]

Well the time chamber had one year= one day in real time. So how much time is it going to be in there? a year? a few years?

Eden's family? I don't think they were mentioned before. Well I was thinking of making her Razoul's younger sister. Their parents died/retired and moved away a couple years ago and Razoul took over their dad's job as captain of the guards.

[KingKovu44]

Minor problem with that: Razoul is a rhino and Eden is a cheetah.

[Mike0908]

oh never mind then. Eden's parents maybe died off screen and she was allowed to stay in the palace? Or they're just regular servants in the castle? Hmm.

[KingKovu44]

Well, my storyline was that they were nobles who were friends of Mufasa and Sarabi, and Eden had a talent for dance. When she was old enough, Eden stayed in the palace and danced for Simba before he went to be with Nala.

[Mike0908]

So she's like the court dancer/musican?

[KingKovu44]

Yeah, she's the court belly dancer.

[Mike0908]

Okay cool.

[KingKovu44]

All right, well, I think we're doing pretty well. I like the direction in which the story is going.

[Mike0908]

So we doing some training or going to skip ahead to them having completed the trainging in a year or whatever, and arriving at Destane to fight Mozenrath, Scar, Kthar, and unknowingly Eden.