The Story of the Six Friends(Private)

[LilTiger]

OOC:You can't controll my character Hydro.

[Hydro]

OCC: *Edits* I never even noticed that. Sorry.

[LilTiger]

[quote="Hydro"]Tamu attacked back will all her strength. She slashed in every part of Lilly she could reach.[/quote]
But still, make it long, not two sentences.

[Hydro]

OCC: OK now? ...something's wrong with me today...

[LilTiger]

OOC:Oh well, let's get to where we were.
Lilly started to fight Tamu. But soon, Hydro came and attacked Lilly. Lilly scratched, bited, and slapped Hydro like crazy. "Your never taking Kijani away from me, never!', Lilly sad as she slapped Hydro near Kijani again. On my mark, get set, slap! Lilly said right before she was about to slap him. But then ran over to Tamu and attacked her. Then went back over to Hydro. She was about to slap him when she felt herself be swung accross the cave into the wall.

[Hydro]

Hydro watched in horror as Tamu grabbed Lilly, and, despite Lilly's weight as a Tigress, threw her against the wall in rage. But Tamu's work wasn't over, she moved to Lilly swiftly and attacked her once more. Stop - hurting - Hydro! She yelled as she continued attacking.

Hydro was rooted to the spot, unbelievably watching Tamu protect him. But, he had to fight too, and he knew it quite good, he even wanted to, but he didn't. He still stood there, and even he didn't know why. Something was stopping him.

[LilTiger]

When Lilly was slammed into the wall, she saw Tamu coming towards her. Tamu,please...stop. Lilly said as she saw Tamu swipe her paw at her. Then, Lilly heard Tamu's words, then was beaten up again. As Tamu attacked, Lilly kept shouting Tamu! Stop!. But it wasn't working. Soon, Lilly was cut up, was brused all over and was coughing up blood. Tamu, stop. Then, Lilly fainted.

[Simbadacub]

Takota growled a bit and scratched Tuma on the nose and stood over lily and hissed.

[Hydro]

Tamu stopped her attack and moved over to the far side of the cave, not talking to anyone, not looking at anyone, not wanting to be with anyone. Hydro didn't know what to do... he was confused. Badly confused... he slowly advanced to Tamu, and asked: Uhhh... Tamu? Tamu looked up. What? she said. Uhhh...well... Hydro didn't know how to put it in words, That wasn't neces- I mean... it... Hydro thought a bit... thanks.

Don't mention it, said Tamu, lowering her head. Hydro was still uncertain about something. He continued, W-why... would you do it? Why don't you just... go... it will be better off for you. You were dragged in this mess, and... your still staying...

Tamu looked up at him. I've decided Kijani will not be with a sister like that, or else he'll die... and, by the way, why did I prevent Lilly attacking you? I thought you knew already. Tamu said with a slight smirk. Oh yeah... we're doing this together. How stupid of me... Hydro also felt a smile come to his face as he turned away, but when both of them looked up towards Lilly and the others, both their small smiles where wiped off.

[LilTiger]

As Lilly lied on the ground, fainted, in her mind, it she heard faint voices calling for her. Lilly. Lilly. Lilly. Lilly. Then, only in her mind, she awoke. Wha..... Lilly looked up, and saw her father. Lilly. Then, Lilly ran over to her father and nuzzled him. Daddy, I miss you, why did you and mother leave me, and with Kijani? I left because Kijani was mine, and not your mothers. So, I left, then, she left you to find me, then, she did find me, but however, you remember wakeing up with Kijani in your paws? Yes Daddy. Well, your mother put him there, so he wouldn't crawl off. Oh mother, where is my mom? Well, she stayed, I came to visit you in your mind. Then, Lilly felt like someone was looking at her. Daddy, I've got to go. Sweetie...no. I have to. Bye. Without a nuzzle, she quickly ran off, into th black, whih this was all in her head.
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While Lilly lied on the ground unconscious, Kijani was crying. His eyes weren't open, but he wanted milk, but couldn't have it. Whaaaa! Kijani was crying as loud as ever. He wanted his mommy, his sister, and food. But then, he fainted from all the confusion.