Zira's Message (RP Poem)

Zira's Message (RP Poem)

Postby KingKovu44 » July 14th, 2011, 5:51 pm

Finally, a poem from one of the Outlander's POV. No bashing or flaming please.
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Zira’s Message


Simba

Son of Mufasa

King of Pride Rock

My nephew

The bane of my existence

Know that I will bring you down

Your family will be taken

Before your very eyes

Be prepared

It will happen soon

In Scar’s name

I curse you
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Re: Zira's Message (RP Poem)

Postby changa » July 14th, 2011, 10:47 pm

Dark. Thanks for doing one about her!
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Re: Zira's Message (RP Poem)

Postby KingKovu44 » July 14th, 2011, 10:57 pm

Thanks. I think this is actually one of the darkest things I've ever written.
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Re: Zira's Message (RP Poem)

Postby Thegeni99 » July 30th, 2011, 6:10 am

"In Scar's name, I curse you." That is so freaking dark! I love this poem, thank you for writing it. Many people don't write from her POV.
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Re: Zira's Message (RP Poem)

Postby KingKovu44 » July 30th, 2011, 1:52 pm

Thanks, Geni. After several pieces of Simba/Nala love poetry, it was time for this.
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Re: Zira's Message (RP Poem)

Postby Maleficent » August 16th, 2011, 12:06 am

Wow! This is nice! I love things from Zira's POV. I have to say that the last two lines were my favorite. xD
C'est le sentiment solitaire dans le monde - de vous trouver debout quand tout le monde est assis.
Pour avoir tout le monde vous regarde et dire «ce qui est de la question avec elle?" Je sais ce qu'on ressent.
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Re: Zira's Message (RP Poem)

Postby KingKovu44 » August 16th, 2011, 12:12 am

Thanks. This was the darkest thing I've ever written.
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Re: Zira's Message (RP Poem)

Postby Maleficent » August 16th, 2011, 12:14 am

I liked it a lot! Dark can be good for something different, you know? And it certainly fits Zira.
C'est le sentiment solitaire dans le monde - de vous trouver debout quand tout le monde est assis.
Pour avoir tout le monde vous regarde et dire «ce qui est de la question avec elle?" Je sais ce qu'on ressent.
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Re: Zira's Message (RP Poem)

Postby KingKovu44 » August 16th, 2011, 12:15 am

I agree. Thanks.
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