Without light dawns.

Without light dawns.

Postby Mozart » June 23rd, 2011, 3:57 am

Hello herd, today I bring you an old story that was written by my long time. I hope you like it. Also put it in Spanish just in case a user can speak the language and achieve a much better understanding.
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Without light dawns

Chapter 1
How much time has passed?


It sometimes make mistakes we do not want .... But sometimes what we make because we really want .... Perhaps, it will be for those broken dreams of the past? Or ... Why we thought we were only the shadow of a person?. Many of the things that happen in life.

The sun had come, something very typical of every morning, but somehow it was not hot sun to the inhabitants of Pridelands. ... The sky was blue that was tinged with gray, which is very unusual sebe only when it will rain, but the sky showed no sign of rain.
Pridelands looked nothing like before, its floors were stained gray color, very similar to the sky. Little sign of vegetation was in that kingdom, rivers and ponds had dried up. Only one pond had dried up, but how much time is remaining in the pond follow in the footsteps of others?.
It seemed that Aiheu had cursed the land, but was not. Being that he had changed the face of Pridelands was ... King Scar Scar. Mufasa's brother and uncle of his nephew, Simba.
He had killed his own brother, I tried to kill his nephew, which failed but he did not know that, as it was the hyenas Shenzi. Banzai and Ed carrying out such work.
He had spent time within a year, but the lionesses of the pack seemed to last a long time, much like a 4. Weather lands were long for the lionesses, they always believed that Mufasa would send an angel to come to rescue. But this had not been sent.
A lioness, with blue eyes was walking through the dry lands near a hill. That lion was sitting, his face expressions of sadness. Soon one would have to go hunting, but it would if it was not nearly prey in the land. They were the few times I saw a dam, and even when they could catch a few. It seemed like they were playing a game that they and their flock not win.
- Nala! - The voice of one of the lionesses had ear is time for the hunt! -
The blue-eyed lioness had risen, and went to the rest of the pack for hunting. But his steps became slower, as if he weighed the body which concerns many of the lionesses. Sarafina, his mother thought he had caught a disease which has already seen much in the pack.
-Nala, Are you okay? - Asked if mother worried about her daughter.
'If mother. I was just pensando.-The lioness gave a sigh as if it has to say something important or not because 'Mother, I have a question, I hope you can answer me can you? - Said the lioness with a little concern.
'Of course daughter, I can say all you want and I will gladly answer what-
'All right, the blue-eyed young lioness draws a slight smile on his face, then say your big question-Mother ... How much time has passed that Mufasa and Simba have left? -
That left the lion question a little "shocked" Sarafina thought of other kinds of questions but it was totally unexpected. The lioness did not know how to answer her daughter, for her time between that past and present were long. But if he knew he had only been a year since those deaths.
'Child's voice had grown lioness sad-Although you do not believe me, it has only been a year since the accident.
Nala sighed, she knew it was true what his mother had said but for her it was hard to accept, because they thought he had passed over, many more years. I try to put a happy face even though it cost him.
-We better go to the hunt, said the lioness mother with blue eyes, ready for another game that is sure to lose.
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Amaneceres sin luz
Capítulo 1: ¿Cuanto tiempo ha pasado?


Ha veces cometemos errores que no queremos…. Pero algunas veces lo cometemos porque en verdad queremos…. ¿Acaso, será por aquellos sueño rotos del pasado? ¿O… Por qué pensábamos que sólo éramos las sombra de una persona?. Son muchas de las cosas que suceden en la vida.

Había salido el sol, algo muy típico de todas las mañanas, pero de alguna forma éste sol no daba calor a los habitantes de PrideLands. El cielo… que era de color azul estaba teñido de un color gris, cosa muy inusual que solo sebe cuando va a llover, pero el cielo no daba señales de una lluvia.
PrideLands no se veía como antes, sus suelos estaban teñidos del color grisáceo, muy parecido al del cielo. Pocas señales de vegetación de veía en aquel reino, los ríos y charcas se habían secado. Solo una charca no había secado, pero ¿Cuánto tiempo faltaba para que esa charca siguiera los pasos de las demás?.
Parecía que Aiheu había maldecido esas tierras, pero no era así. El ser que había cambiado el aspecto de PrideLands, era Scar… El Rey Scar. Hermano de Mufasa y tío de su sobrino, Simba.
Él había matado a su propio hermano he intento matar a su sobrino, algo que no consiguió pero el no sabe eso, ya que era las hienas Shenzi. Banzai y Ed encargadas de ese trabajo.
Había pasado un plazo de tiempo de un año, pero para las leonas de la manada parecía que había pasado mucho tiempo, más o menos como unos 4. El tiempo en las tierras eran largas para las leonas, ellas siempre creían que Mufasa enviaría a un ángel que los vendría a rescatar. Pero tal envío no se había visto.
Una leona, de ojos azules estaba caminando por las secas tierras, cerca de una colina. Aquella leona se había sentado, su cara estaba con expresiones de tristeza. Muy pronto tendría que ir a una casería, pero de que serviría si casi no quedaba presas en las tierras. Eran las pocas veces que veían a una presa, y aún más pocas cuando lograban cazar alguna. Parecía como si estuvieran jugando un juego que ellas y su manada no ganaban.
-¡Nala!- La voz de una de las leonas se había oído- ¡Es hora de la casería!-
La leona de ojos azules se había levantado, y se dirigió a las demás de la manada para cazar. Pero sus pasos se volvieron lentos, como si le pesara el cuerpo cosa que preocupo a muchas de las leonas. Sarafina, su madre, pensaba que había cazado alguna enfermedad cosa que ya se veía mucho en la manada.
-Nala, ¿Te encuentras bien?- Preguntó si madre preocupada por su hija.
-Si madre. Sólo estaba pensando.-La leona dio un suspiro como si fuera ha decir algo importante o no debido- Madre, te tengo una pregunta, espero que me la puedas contestar ¿Puedes?- Dijo la leona con un poco de preocupación.
-Por supuesto hija, me puedes decir todo lo que quieras y yo con gusto te lo contesto-
-Esta bien-La joven leona de ojos azules dibuja un leve sonrisa en su rostro, para después decir su gran pregunta- Madre… ¿Cuánto tiempo ha pasado de que Mufasa y Simba no han dejado?-
Aquella pregunta dejó a la leona un poco “chocada”, Sarafina pensaba en otras clases de preguntas pero está fue totalmente inesperada. La leona no sabía como contestarle a su hija, para ella el tiempo entre ese pasado y el presente eran largos. Pero si sabía que solo habían pasado un año desde aquellas muertes.
-Hija-La voz de la leona se había tornado algo triste-Aunque tú no me lo creas, solo ha pasado un año desde ese accidente.
Nala suspiró, ella sabía que era cierto lo que había dicho su madre pero para ella era difícil de aceptar, ya que había pensado que había pasados más años, muchos más años. Intento poner una cara de alegría aunque le costara.
-Mejor nos vamos a la casería, madre- Dijo la leona de ojos azules, preparada para otro juego que de seguro perdería.
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Re: Without light dawns.

Postby FlipMode » July 5th, 2011, 10:52 pm

You know, aside from the English not being fully understood for obvious reasons. This is fairly interesting so far. I get the feeling this was originally written in Spanish and it does show, but aside from punctuation and spacing, I can still respect roughly where the plot is going and would not mind reading some more of it ^^.
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