(Rofl! One thing though, just say what Amani is doing, not what Kara is doing about it. That's my job. So like "Amani had backed Kara up so much that she was now leaning against a rock." That's my job. You could just say "Amani approached Kara slowly". I'm supposed to say what Kara does about things that go on. Just saying.

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Kara growled and moved away from the rock, realizing how vounerable she was at that spot. She was quickly back at Kayan's side. "How many times have I told you that I need me freedom?" She asked her, giving her a cold, Kara-like stare.