I know you haven't been online for a while but I will still ask my question. When can we get the next chapter? I like how you write descriptively and long chapters, sometimes it's just hard to find stories like that. What goes for critique is something you really cannot get from me since English is not my mother tongue. Azdgari pointed out the use of "deliriously ecstatic" and that they mean basically the same thing, for me it's just more descriptive way to describe the feelings of the main character in that specific moment.
Then writing in first-perspective is nothing I have against at, maybe because when reading you can put yourself easier in it. Also to note you write "Aeihu", John Burkitt; the creator of COTPL write it "Ahieu". Just so you know, if you now are trying to follow the original one.