castle : meeting beckett the fight

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castle : meeting beckett the fight

Postby lionkingfreak » March 29th, 2011, 3:33 pm

beckett had thought about what rafiki and her mother had told her. the next day , beckett went to work . just then castle approched her. beckett smiled. the gang wondered what was going on , and looked at the two lions. '' sorry our about yesterday . i sould have not went into your buissness.'' castle told the pretty young lioness. beckett blushed. she looked up at the hansome young lion , with her shaphire blue eyes , she told him , '' i was being a jerk yesterday. i should be the one saying sorry . '' just then a flashback went though beckett's mind ! she remebered her mother's death. she gasped and ran , '' come on guys , follow me ! '' castle , ryan , espostido , mountgoumery , and lanie , looked puzzled , but ran to try and catch up with her. when beckett reached africa , she was furious by what she had seen . her pridelands was desroyed under her aunt zira's rule. castle ran up to beckett. he was furious too. beckett explained to her friends that she was born here , and why she decided to return. beckett needed a dervertion , so she sent ryan and espostido to distract the dobermans. ryan did not like the idea. '' what do you want me to do ? dress in drag and do the hula ?'' while they distracted the dobermans , beckett , castle , lanie , and mountgoumery where able to sneak by . when they where in an area where they could not be seen , beckett gave castle , lanie , and mountgoumery directions . '' you find my father and rally the lionesses , i'll look for zira !'' the others nodded and left. as beckett made her way towards pride rock , she could hear the rumble of thunder in the distance , and suddenly ...... '' mufasa !!!!! '' beckett gasped , and looked behind the rock. it was her father ! mufasa made his way towards the voice. beckett looked to see who it was who yelled. it was her aunt zira ! '' yes , zira .'' mufasa answered. zira snapped at the old lion king. '' where is your hunting party ? they're not doing there job ! '' mufasa ruffled his brown mane. '' zira , there's no food. the herds have moved on . '' zira snickerd , '' no . your just not looking hard enough ! '' '' it's over , there is noting left ! we have only one choice , we must leave pride rock. '' mufasa demanded. '' we're not going anywhere ! '' zira disagreed . '' then you have sentenacted us to death ! '' mufasa yelled. '' then so be it ! '' zira replied. ''you can't do that ! '' mufasa answered. '' i'm the queen , i can do what ever i want ! '' zira told mufasa , as she looked at him with her evil green eyes . '' if you half the queen sarabi was ... '' mufasa started . '' I'M TEN TIMES THE QUEEN SARABI WAS ! '' zira yelled . with a swipe of her paw , the villioness wacked mufasa to the ground . thunder rumbled and lighting crashed , and suddenly ...... '' RRRROOOOAAAARRRR ! '' zira was shocked . '' sarabi , no . your dead . '' beckett ran over to mufasa , and nuzzled him. mufasa woke up . he looked at the lioness .'' sarabi ?'' he asked her . beckett shock her head . '' no. it's me . '' '' beckett ? your alive ? how can that be ? '' mufasa said. beckett told her dad it did not matter , and walked up to zira . '' give me one good reason why i should'nt rip you appart ! '' zira aruged with beckett . '' well beckett , tell them who is reponseable for sarabi's death ! '' the gang looked sickend . beckett sadly stepped forward. '' i am . '' the pride gasped , and mufasa stepped forward . '' it's not true. tell me it's not true. '' mufasa pleaded . '' it's true ! '' beckett amitted. zira snickered . '' you see , she , admitts it ! murder ! '' beckett told the pride it was an acindent , but zira and the dobermans pushed beckett towards the edge of pride rock . '' oh , beckett , your in trouble again , only this time mommy is'nt here to save you , and now every one knows WHY ! '' zira froced beckett to slip off the edge of pride rock . '' beckett !'' castle called . zira told beckett about what had happed to her mother. she had the flash back again ! '' NOOOOOOOOOOO ! murderer ! '' beckett yelled. part 2 will come soon !
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this is beckett's flashback of her mother, sarabi before she died.
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