Simba's Pride: What Should Have Been

[atouchofgrace]

I like it. Nuka is better character here.
Do more, please. I'm curious to see how you'll fill in all those plot holes and mistakes.

[zorayda]

Chapter 2 is up! Thank you for all of your comments, and rest assured there will be a lot more of Nuka soon!

[KingKovu44]

Looking good so far.

[TheDoctor]

Loving it so far, Zorry!

The only thing I'd like to mention is that I'm a little confused about Kovu's age. Was he born by the time Scar was killed? How old would he have been by Chaka's death then? And how old would he be in chapter two?

Other than that, the story's looking very good so far ^^

[zorayda]

Zira was pregnant with Kovu when Scar was killed, and was born shortly afterwards. He's an infant when Chaka is killed, still unable to walk. In chapter two, he's older than Kiara by a couple of months, but still a cub. So...

Scar's Death-

Kovu- unborn
Vitani- unborn
Nuka- cub

Chaka's death-

Kovu- newborn
Vitani- newborn
Nuka- just coming out of cubhood and into adolescence.

Kiara's birth-

Kovu- A couple months old
Vitani- A couple months old
Nuka- beginning adolescence

[TheDoctor]

Ah, right.

[quote]He’d whispered in her ear, telling her to make Kovu the next king, to kill Simba, to avenge him…[/quote]
Just that sentence made me a little confused xD

[zorayda]

Well, I guess I should clarify:

She didn't know the name of her cub yet, but she knew that she was pregnant. We'll say that Scar assumed that she was carrying a male... Hrm, now that you mention it, I should probably revise that... XP Thanks, Kanu!

[TheDoctor]

Hehe, yeah, I thought it could be like that, but I wanted to make sure I understood it right

[K0PA]

that is so good i all was wanted to hear mor of wat hapind behind the sins in sp but i cood not find enithing relavent