Methods of tortue for a LK Fan fic

[dariusgib]

For The Circle Of Life Part VI it looks like i have to add tortue.
Heres why. In the plan to take the pridelnads Zira along with her other conspriators (its much better then this explanation i have a topic with better information called what shall the next circle of Life be called)
She kidnaps Kiara and (to add more connection with Kiara's character, so you feel her pain and kind of feel the emotional essence) tortues her.
Now Verbal abuse im already fixing up but (no need to be sadistic) but you need some physical as well especcialy since Zira wants to rip Kiaras head off since she was born.
Banzai was originally the tortuer but the problem was that i wanted Banzai to be good and its already hard to make the reader believe and Simba to take him as good and this wouldnt help
"Ill take Banzai as a friend after he tried to kill me a hundred times and torttued my daughter. MMMM
SO heres the methods so far.
Kiara is pregant so heres some.

Slaps her swelled belly repeatdly.

Slapping her face

Gagging her with leaves.

Im sorry about these but its neccariy for the drama.
Please share your views

[atouchofgrace]

[quote="dariusgib"]Gagging her with leaves.[/quote]

Oh . my . God

[Panda-chan]

LOL wtf? This is so wrong

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[Azdgari]

You're torturing a pregnant lioness? I don't know if there's any way to go about it without being sadistic. =\

I would recommend perhaps the gagging? I would really warn against slapping a pregnant person's belly, that's (in my opinion) pretty darn screwed up. Whatever accomplishes what you're trying to do with the least amount of violence is probably the best option. ^^

[xLilacVixenx]

Wow, that slapping on the belly seems really harsh for a fan-fiction.

I would choose slapping across the face, as it seems the least bad of all three.

[Shade]

Dude that's just sick man

[dariusgib]

Sorry about all this.
This episode i've thought more about then all the other ones so far, (Perhaps except from the Truth the best one so far)
Just so we dont get off on the wrong foot i'm not a sadist. But Zira is so i had to think like a sadist.
So i do understand thatt these are rather. Cruel.
When i was even writting the ruff copy of some of these methods i joked to myself that i should work at Gunatamino Bay.
I will when the title poll is finished and i've written it i will send this to a mod to proof read to see if it is appropriate.
I wanted to get readers connecting with the characters and just to feel the raw emotions.
Sorry for disturbing some of you lol

[TheIvanMuse]

Don't make topics like this,it's just sick.
*locked*