The Circle of Life Part II Escape from the Clowns

[dariusgib]

Hi guys this is part II of the long series of fan fics I’m writing called the Circle of Life. Please comment and share your views

Chapter I Imperial Demands

Simba was annoyed. Why did he have to meet Banzai? What did he have to do with Nala? Why was this more important then my son.
When he reached King Centre, Banzai was smirking, planning his sly speech.
“What do you want Banzai.” He was angry and annoyed.
“I wanted to discuss with you the state of your kingdom, the pride rock royal family is a relic soon to be put in the museums of expansion. The hyena empire demands you’re surrender.”
Simba couldn’t help laughing.
“Oh Banzai, when did you learn big words. And when did you have an empire, or is that the lets learn the letter A society.”
Banzai smirked.
Simba thought someone should slap him in the face.

“We did when you ignored us for so long. Nala thought it was very interesting as well.”
Simba stopped in his tracks and grew angry.
“What did you do?”
“I couldn’t resist, she was too helpless. You better take more care next time.”
“What did you do Banzai?”
Simba was in no mood for games.

“Well she’s with us in the valley of the sower. I’m telling you this because Reth’s already told you.”
Simba couldn’t deny it. He was right and knew he couldn’t win just yet. Just play along. He thought

“What do you want Banzai.” Banzai was pleased by the enthusiasm.
“Here’s the deal.” He said trying to look intelligent.
“If you don’t hand over the Pride lands in 4 days. We kill her”.
Simba started to sweat then.
“If you hand over half. Banzai continued. “We take her to the empire never to be seen again. But if you hand it all over you can feel the love tonight still, just in imperial lands”.
“Or I could just kill you now”. Simba said. A smirk spreading across his face like a virus.
“You can’t because I told my men if I don’t return in ten minutes to kill Nala”.
Simba froze. Banzai had thought everything through.
“The empire anticipates your surrender”. Banzai said as he walked away over to the valley.
“Not while I breathe”. Simba muttered as a black and dark brown lion with a scar came along side him.

Chapter II Playing the Courtesan

Nala woke up. Where am I?
It was dark so she knew she was in a cave.
Oh I must be at home she thought. Taking a rest.
Then she remembered the sinister truth.
She had been captured by hyenas that had knocked her out during the march. Then at the mouth of the cave a familiar face appeared. “Hello beautiful.”
Great Nala thought. It’s my favourite hyena.
Nala was lying down.
Well she couldn’t do much else.
What had mother called me when I was a cub? Silently observant.
So Nala did just that and looked round the cave. Banzai had planned well.
The cave was strong so there was no beating her way out. And killing the guard wouldn’t help because there was a large row of hyenas in front. Killing the guard wouldn’t help at all. But there was another way.
“Hello handsome” she called to the guard. He was going to enjoy this.
“Hello Nala, you’ve been such a bad girl.” Nala nodded seductively.
Just a few more seconds and we never mention this to Simba. “Oh yes.” She said seductively, “I need to be taught a lesson, a hard one.”

“Don’t mind if I do”. Said the hyena. Too perverted to care that she was outside his race.
He walked behind Nala. “The names Cesare, I’m way better then Simba is at this.” His green eyes widing.
“Oh really” thought Nala.
“Oh I bet you are” she actually said.
As the hyena prepared for his act Nala kicked him with her hind legs in the stomach. He howled as Nala got on his back and put her claw down his back.
If he made a sudden movement he was dead.
“Now do exactly as I say” she whispered.

Chapter III A king, a prince and a fighting chance.

Kovu came to Simba’s side. He had heard everything Banzai had said.
“I’m guessing were going to charge in there after her.”
“Like old times”. Simba said laughing.
“Well if are first time counts as an old time then yes.” Simba smiled. Kovu’s new sense in humour amused him.
“Kovu.” He said hesitation in his voice. “I know I’m asking for a lot but, if this was your mother operation, how would guards be planned.”
Kovu shivered. He didn’t like to think about his mother.
And still didn’t believe she was dead.
How could she be? The water was not up long enough to drown her.
But he continued.
“She would have had guards surrounding the area. Two lookouts at each corner.” Simba thought.
Yes it was possible.
“Walk with me.”

They walked around the whole valley.
No visible silent entrances.
They nearly gave up hope when Kovu spotted something.

“Why is there a group of hyenas gathered round one point?” Simba looked. They where watching something.
Seeing there chance they snuck into the valley.
What they didn’t know until they got there was that they were watching Nala holding the perverted Cesare by the throat.
“Let me go or he gets it.”
Soon this chaos attracted the attention of Banzai.
“Well hello Banzai nice to see you”. She said with a fake smile. “Let me go or Cesare gets it.”
Banzai quickly replied “Does it look like I care about one of my perverted little guards?”
Nala thought for a second.
No he wouldn’t and dropped him.
As he ran off Banzai tripped him over and put his leg on his throat. Tempted to break his neck.
He let go and let the other hyenas hold him.
“As for you” he spat. “I might leave you chained up and gagged with that little freak. With you’re daughter as well.”
At this Nala swiped him on the face.
“Oww” he said slyly. “That hurt, time to tame the little snake I think.” As he walked to hit Nala Kovu burst through the crowd and held Banzai by the throat. (sorry for this cliché)
“Back off or ill kill him”. Kovu shouted as Simba took his side next to Nala.
The hyenas backed of. Even Cesare who looked grateful.

“You have now idea what you’re doing.” He gasped. “The emperor will hear of this.”
“Oh really” cried Simba. “I’ll send him a present shall I ?”
Banzai took advantage of this moment to come up with a plan.
“Oh but Simba.” He said smiling. “You think Kovu has never seen my face before, oh I have a lot to say about that”.
“What are you talking about?” Kovu shouted, but his fear was showing.
“So you haven’t told them are little secret have you.”
“There is no secret.” Kovu shouted.
“Well the parents are here, tell them Kovu, why Kopa started to disconnect with his parents before he ran way.”
Simba looked in Kovus eyes.
And he could see the story.

Chapter IV Kopas chums

Kopa the eldest twin was wondering around pride rock.
But he walked a little too far.
This was much long before his incident with the vultures. He would wander a lot. And think about the world.
His meeting with the outsiders was bound to happen.
He rolled down the dusty outlands hill.
“Oww” thought Kopa. “Haven’t been here before”. Then he saw a tail poking out of a bush next to a dead tree. Swaying in the breeze.
Then he approached the bush. Like a curious child, hypnotised by its movement.
Then suddenly he heard a loud “BOO,” he jumped and cried with fright. Then the smiling, smirking figures of cub Kovu and Vitani came up laughing at there silly trick.
“Baby” they called.
Kopa, annoyed by this pounced on Kovu and took him down.
“No one pins me down”. Thought Kovu and tried to do it himself.
But Kopa beat him again. Then they got up and laughed about it.
Friendship seemed to be sprouting.
As night was ripe Vitani talked to Kovu. “I’m not sure we should play with him, Mother would not approve.” Kovu soon said.

“Stuff it, mother doesn’t control us.” As they went home Kovu called.
“Kopa, see you tomorrow."

While walking home Kovu met Banzai. Banzai grinning said "i doubt your mother would aprove of you meeting with the enemy".

Kovu panicked. "Please don't tell." He cried. "We're only playing, ill do anything."
Banzai smilied and came up with the plan.
"Dont tell anyone about me." Kovu nodded. Their transaction was done.
And because of this Kopa instead of being with his family played with outsiders which eventually caused him to run away.

Chapter V Shock and Escape

Banzai taking advantage of the shock of this tale barged Kovu off him and shouted
“Kill them, Kill the royal quacks, tear them to pieces”.
Simba and Kovu putting aside there differences ran for there lives, Nala with them till the hyenas could chase them no more.
While all this had been happening Zazu and Kiara had been having a serious argument about who should tell Sarafina that Nala had been captured and Simba hadn’t come back yet.
“No you should tell her princess, she’s you’re grand mother.”
“No you should, you’re the Major Domo.”
“No you should.”
“No you.”
Then at that moment Sarafina strolled in. “Hello Kiara, hello Zazu.”
Both of them gasped and Zazu being one of those panicky types said immediately what they were discussing in a very quick voice.
“Nala’s been captured by hyenas and Simba hasn’t come back yet”.

Sarafina after one second of hearing theses words. Crossed her eyes and fainted.
Kiara and Zazu stared at Sarafina. Then each other. Then Sarafina again then each other. And Kiara could only say one thing
“You
Idiot.”

Chapter VI Remember Remember

When they had got back to Pride Rock the lions fainted in exhaustion.
1 hour later Simba woke up and was attracted to the next room in the cave by a strange noise.
There in the corner of the cave he saw Sarafina propped in the corner with Zazu fanning her and Kiara begging her to wake up.
Simba then for 5 seconds thought this was normal and carried on walking, and then he stopped and turned round.
And Kiara slowly turned round.
“Hi Dad” she said.
“Nala, Kovu get in here.” He called, gaining his senses. “Kiara has my mother in law unconscious in a corner.”
Nala and Kovu quickly rushed into the cave.
Luckily to see Sarafina waking up. As soon as she did Kiara was soon pleading.
“Don’t blame me blame that cretin Zazu, it’s his fault.”
Zazu was taken back. “My fault it was as much you’re fault you brat.”
“Shut up” said Sarafina dreamily.
They shut up.
“Nala” she said. “I remember.” Nala and Simba became curious.
“What do you remember?” Nala asked.
"I remember who you’re father is.”
It was Nala’s turn to faint.
“You’re turn to fan” cried Zazu to Kiara passing her the leaf.
END OF PART II

[xLilacVixenx]

The same main problems as my last review; at some times, I was really confused at what was going on, but the overall plot was a lot better than before. Clever touch on the hyenas killing Nala if Banzai doesn't show up. The ending was funny as well. Just try to work on spacing, grammer, puncuation, and spelling, my friend. You'll improve in time. (:

[K0PA]

this louks like a good storay will read mour later