A Friendship Will Never Die.

A Friendship Will Never Die.

Postby FallenAngel18 » November 14th, 2010, 1:19 am

So this is my very first fan fiction. i'm really good at some, but this is new to me. You'll just have to bear with me. This is only in the making, so I would like constructive critism, but not horrible critism please. This takes place in LK before SP


Synopsis

Nala has just found Simba in the jungle and they reunite. Everyone thinks they were best friends for the longest time, and were in love. But what happens when an old friend of Simba's back in his cubhood comes back after her family's exile? She loves him, but Nala loves Simba, and Simba can't decide. Who will he choose?


Not the best synopsis but it's good enough. Basically I have an original family of mine that was sent into exile when Marina (my Oc) was just a cub, now she's back and finds SImba, but sees he loves Nala, and she wants him for herself.


So what do you guys think? It's in the making, so it won't be too good. My Ocs are Riyul, Evina, and Marina, the family sent into exile. I'll put them in the original character forum if anyone wants to see them.
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Re: A Friendship Will Never Die.

Postby xLilacVixenx » November 14th, 2010, 1:35 am

An interesting topic, but I feel I've treaded on the same path before..:P
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Re: A Friendship Will Never Die.

Postby FallenAngel18 » November 14th, 2010, 1:38 am

thanks, and if you have i dont want to takle the same from you it would make me feel bad :sad:

btw: I love your signature and your avatar. I am in love with How To Train Your Dragon!!! :D
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Re: A Friendship Will Never Die.

Postby xLilacVixenx » November 14th, 2010, 1:40 am

Aw, I'm sorry if I made you feel bad. *Hugs* Even if I have, it would be interesting reading it from a different writer's view. :)

Thank you! If you would like me to make you one, you can just request in my graphic topic. *Points to signature links* ^_^
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Re: A Friendship Will Never Die.

Postby FallenAngel18 » November 14th, 2010, 1:44 am

well thanks. I'm sure it won't be like yours 8-) at least i hope

and i just requested one, i hope it won't be too bad.
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Re: A Friendship Will Never Die.

Postby Arani » December 7th, 2010, 2:46 am

Very interesting... I'm actually looking forward to it! :D
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