The battle of Kronite

The battle of Kronite

Postby Nukascar1 » November 8th, 2010, 10:15 pm

This is a novel based in the 40k unerverse o a planet called Kronite it follows a young officer in the Imperial guards forces his name is Kiador "fox heart" Johnston leading a newly formed regiment Niju's own this is their story.

Chapter 1: Waking up dead

As I started blinking the celling of the bunker started becoming clearer and clearer I started trying to move my left arm I didn't see anything or feel anything I Tried opening my right eye it didn't open but now I could see. My arm was nothing more now then a bloodly bandged stump as I looked in the glass of the medical room my right eye was covered in bandages. I didn't know why to be honest I didn't want to know then I heard a strage unfamiler and unfriendly voice spoke. A stroung looking lord comminsar shouted at the medical staff "He's waking up test the bionics on him NOW!!" The medical staff complied and started unraviling my bandages. And cutting into the stump of a arm I shouted in pain as the Comminsar looked me in the eye getting his bolt pistol out of his belt. "This is what you get for betrail Heritic!He spat in my face and shot me in the stomach.

I must of passed out from blood loss as I started to have a dream. I dreamt that I was standing surrounded by Necrons. They started to part as a fox who looked more like the great Thunder Fangir's of Feris approced me more and more I tried to move but I was bolted on the spot. I knew that I was dreaming as the fox started to talk he said. "So we met again it's been 19 years my son since I sent you to that vile planet which I am truly sorry for." He started circling me as I said "who are you want do you mean"


"I I am Niju one of the five gods of the Necrons Me Kaero The nightbringer the deciver the void dragon and the outsider The great c'tan."
"No I am the emprior loaly servent"
"Ahh the illusion listen to me and listen to me well whenever you wake up from this dream they will want to kill you get out of that binker at all cost's I am sending some of my loaly servents to your postions your men are already fighting to get you out Now you will feel a sharp pain in your neck as soon as you do start running" As soon as he said that he jumped at my neck I rework seeing the surgen had stck a syringe in my neck.

I quickly disarmed him before he could press the liquid in I punched him in the head knocking him out I quickly put on some reousers and some boots on. Grabbed my catachen dagger and my shotgun and ran out side seeing before me which was once a peaceful hive city had been transformed into a battlefield!
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Re: The battle of Kronite

Postby Nukascar1 » November 11th, 2010, 8:46 pm

Chapter 2: The battle

As the lasgun blasts riccoched off walls plasma cannons bluttered out death and bolt guns began spat. I felt a strage sense of peace enjoyment as if I was........... at home then the rain began I watched as troops slipped in the mud tying to retreat as a young comminsar with little experiance screamed out orders "NO RETREATING MAN YOUR POASTS" he said but it was no use.

I saw who he was what he looked like couldn't be more then 20 years old his sword and black trech coat covered with blood and mud. With a dirty goatee and filthy hat. The I reconasied him it was Gat. One of my only friends in the regiment I rushed to him. Then I began to notice something the troops the they......cheeared at the site of me moral once gone fresh again. At once returning to the makeshift barricads and firing with such enthusasim I could swear they enjoyed this.

"Great to see you again sir" Gat spoke he had a rough accent like many of the men from Morox
"Same to you"I replied getting behind cover "Whats the situration".
"We heard about you being captured and rushed here we've sercured the perimater but we were attacked by the white scars space marine company"
"Damm."

"I'll be back" I ran over to a heavy weapons team "Okay get these Morters out of the open get into cover whenevr we charge provide us with covering fire take as many of them out as you can got it."
"Yes sir" they all replied starting to trudge with their equiment into the ruins of a building

I ran back to the barricades the white scars were appronching and fast
"Sir orders" Gat said the white scars were so close he was able to take some out with his bolt pistol I did the same with my shotgun.
"Okay men listen up"I shouted so the troops could hear me "We're going over the top.....together all right It's a sucide mission but it's all we got WHO'S WITH ME!"
The men shoted and cheered ready to "okay" I said taking in deep breaths rearing myself up the whole world seemed to go silent. "1...."they were getting closer I could hear there bolters "2....." The trudging of rhino's could be heard. "3 move move move"I pushed out running with my men trying to get close enother to kill atleast one.

Then I stopped the white scar in frount of me had vanished dissapering into a pale green smoke. "Ohhh crap" I looked at the left flank they're were Necrons. "EVERYBODY MOVE BACK RETREAT" I shouted and sure they did 5 mins later. I rasied my head above one of the barricades. Necron warriors Lord's wraith's destoryers. All infrount of me.......at ease.

I lifted my head to look at them and still....nothing they didn't shoot didn't move then the lord spoke as the head's of the rest of my regiment poked up from the barricades in a sea of red. "Hello.........friend"
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