LK: Broken [Oneshot]

[Kina]

Hehe, nice. I actually planned on that myself at some point. It'll be interesting to see your perspective of this, though. ^_^

[xLilacVixenx]

Actually, I was going to be doing the first movie, but we could associate the sequel with the first and it would be like one long story.

[Kina]

*Nods.* Mine was more of a larger scope. A series, I suppose. (Taking in the generations all the way back to Mohatu's time.)

[Arani]

Great job on this, Kina! I could just... feel it. Very, very good and I hope you make more!

[Kina]

*Smiles.* Heya, Arani. Many thanks for the comment, and it's much appreciated as I didn't know you read what little I have posted. ^_^

[Arani]

xD to be honest, I'm pretty sure this is the first one of your fics that I've read. But if you have more I'd be happy to read them! ^_^

[AustralianChaos]

As I may have already said on Skype, this is a powerful, moving piece, and a small example of your talents, Kina.

I'll always be one of the first to admit that Nuka is not my favourite character...in fact he's well in the bottom 5 of TLK characters for me...but the story is so powerful and conveys such emotion that even I have to sympathise for him to the point where I tear up.

You are a true writer in EVERY sense of the word...there are great things in your future, that much is obvious. Well done!

[Kina]

*Smiles, then nuzzles.* Many thanks for your kind words, Fuzzy-kins. They're much appreciated.

*Nods.* Nuka has never been among my top favorite either, but he seems to have so much potential. And he's generally a disregarded character, dismissed and unimportant. I'm surprised that this little snippet pushed you to the edge of tears, though. It must be more powerful than I thought. ^_^

*Huggles.* Hehe, I hope so.

[Azdgari]

Beautifully concise and elegant, a true short story. Pretty impressive, Kina. Keep up your great work! ^^

[Kina]

Hehe, thanks. This is incredibly brief for me, actually, but I'm truly glad to see you again, Az. *Super huggles.* I would've cast my vote for you as well in the FotM if I'd known you were back. But I'm glad that you enjoyed this snippet, as well. ^_^