Snowflakes Silent - Poem

[xLilacVixenx]

Tiny snowflakes dropping down,
Making nought one sound,
A dewdrop lay across the cooling grass,
And the snowflake it would not let pass.
So the snowflake left, it's glee had gone,
But continued to sing his silent song.


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Yes, this is a short poem, but I was hoping to do something delicate and fragile in this poem; something different. This is also an observation I find quite calming - ever notice how when you go outside at night in the winter and everything is silent? This poem is my explanation for it. ^_^

[TheRoguePrince]

A very touching poem, the characterization of the participants is ingenius and though the poem is short, it accomplishes what it intends.....

[Lenor]

Very nice but I would change ''But continued to sing his silent song.'' with "But went on singing its silent song."

[xLilacVixenx]

[quote="TheRoguePrince"]A very touching poem, the characterization of the participants is ingenius and though the poem is short, it accomplishes what it intends.....[/quote]

Thank you, Rogue, I really appreciate it. ^_^

[quote="Lenor"]Very nice but I would change ''But continued to sing his silent song.'' with "But went on singing its silent song."[/quote]

Sorry, it's just my writing style, lol.

[Lenor]

[quote]Sorry, it's just my writing style, lol.[/quote]Sure, I apreciate that.

[AdAstrα]

That's lovely! Keep it up

[FlipMode]

That really is quite good! I was able to determine the idea you were putting across without reading the explanation at the bottom, which I think is a sign of a well written poem :]

[xLilacVixenx]

[quote="QueenOfPrideRock"]That's lovely! Keep it up [/quote]

Thanks, lol.


[quote="Flipmode"]That really is quite good! I was able to determine the idea you were putting across without reading the explanation at the bottom, which I think is a sign of a well written poem :]
That really is quite good! I was able to determine the idea you were putting across without reading the explanation at the bottom, which I think is a sign of a well written poem :][/quote]

Thank you, poems are my personal favorite and I enjoy studying them.

[Jess]

Aww, that's a very sweet poem ya got there, so touching it made me smile a little! Also, it has great detail

[xLilacVixenx]

Winter details are very easy for me to write; tend to write poems about wintertime or snow, lol. And thank you!