The Lion King IV - Our Heritage

Re: The Lion King IV - Our Heritage

Postby Kina » October 18th, 2010, 2:57 am

[quote="xLilacVixenx"][quote="Kina"]You're certainly off to a wonderful start, my friend. I was thinking about critiquing tonight, but if its all right I'll wait until you put Chapter III up so I have more substance and more to go off of. (I know usually prologues don't really count when compared to general statistics in writing, XD.) I am enjoying it thus far, though. ^_^[/quote]

You know this may be surprising, but I'm glad you are waiting for the third chapter for critique. I have something special planned for chapter three; hopefully I'll get it finished by tonight. :)[/quote]

Hehe, all right. I'm glad to know that it's actually going to work out for the better. But, my critique will have to wait until tomorrow. An hour really isn't enough time to write a good one, even if it was posted in the next few minutes. *Huggles.* I'll look forward to reading it.
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Re: The Lion King IV - Our Heritage

Postby xLilacVixenx » October 18th, 2010, 2:59 am

[quote="Kina"]I'll look forward to reading it.[/quote]

Lol, and I look forward to writing it! ;)
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Re: The Lion King IV - Our Heritage

Postby Arani » October 18th, 2010, 4:07 am

Very interesting! But I am confused about what hppened to Kira. Other than that it's great, and I am waiting for chapter 3! :)
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Re: The Lion King IV - Our Heritage

Postby xLilacVixenx » October 18th, 2010, 4:09 am

You'll understand what happens in chapter 3. :)
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Re: The Lion King IV - Our Heritage

Postby Arani » October 19th, 2010, 1:51 am

Oh, ok! Looking forward to it then! ^_^
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Re: The Lion King IV - Our Heritage

Postby xLilacVixenx » October 22nd, 2010, 7:07 am

*Update*

I thank you all for patiently waiting for my next chapter to come up; I'll definately have it done by tomorrow night. :lovingsmile2:
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Re: The Lion King IV - Our Heritage

Postby xLilacVixenx » October 23rd, 2010, 10:52 pm

Chapter 3, my current longest chapter, is now up and ready to read. :)
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Re: The Lion King IV - Our Heritage

Postby Jess » October 23rd, 2010, 11:03 pm

0_0 Woooow, that is pure pawsomeness! I love your writing style, verry neat and organized. I like it so far, keep up the ggreat work! I can't stop reading your FF, it's so good x]
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Re: The Lion King IV - Our Heritage

Postby xLilacVixenx » October 23rd, 2010, 11:06 pm

Wow, thank you! ^_^ Yes, I always enjoy keeping my fan-fictions organized; it makes it easier for the eye.
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Re: The Lion King IV - Our Heritage

Postby Jess » October 23rd, 2010, 11:10 pm

IKR? Easy to read, this is one of the best FFs i've read so far(apart from the ones on fanfiction.net) -- and anytime ^^
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