After My Fake Death ~

After My Fake Death ~

Postby James » August 31st, 2010, 4:59 am

Hey Guys, that's my first published fan fic, hope you all like it, please, comment, give me suggestions, so i Can Write better :3
In The End Of My Fics I'll Sugest Good Ones...that i've readed.
Thanks, and...enjoy. :3
The First Chapter Is Small, the other ones will be bigger, don't Worry.
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“First Chapter: After My Fake Death.”

All That I Remember. It’s The Body of My dad down on the ground. After His Death. Scar’s Evil Smile Appearing on My Mind. On My Nightmares. I could not Sleep For a Week.
It was hurting a Lot. Lost My Dad, my family, my best friend. Was a horrible feeling.
After that. I Felt Depressed. I Was Lost on the Savanna. Some Days After That. I Met Timon and Pumbaa.
They Were Really Important For Me. If I Don’t Met them. I Probably wasn’t alive.
They Gave Me Food, and a home.
I Forgot Who I Was.
Soon. On My First Day. I Was Walking On the Oasis…and Just fall on the ground.
I Don’t know why but. Memories came on my mind on that second. From Nala. Mom. Everyone who already seen me on that way. Specially Nala. She Loves to put me on the ground ,pinning on me. I Guess that I Never won a game. By the way. Those memories let me sad. I Went Home. And Layed down to sleep. But. It was perturbating me. Had Nightmares that night. The worst so far. I Woke Up crying. And gone out to walk. I Walked for a while and sited next to a waterfall. And there I was for hours.
I Couldn’t Sleep. I couldn’t Move. I Was Just Thinking on what I Left Behind.
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Re: After My Fake Death ~

Postby James » August 31st, 2010, 5:00 am

“Second Chapter: After A Long Time Of Crying.”

I was Growing Up. I was A Teenager Lion. I can remember what I’ve been trough.
The Tears that falled from my eyes to the ground. I Was Sad For Not Being on my house. But As The Days Was Passing By. I Was Forgetting Who I was. And I’ve begun to forget all the love of my family and friends. Although I Had Timon and Pumbaa. Something Was Missing.
One Day. I Was Next to the River. When Something Hit My Head.
I looked for everywhere. And Didn’t See Nothing.
I looked Up And Saw a Baboon.
He Runned Out. And I Couldn’t Follow Him. But That was weird.
Why That Baboon would attack me?
After a Week. I was Laying down under a Tree when I saw the baboon.
On The First Opportunity. I went To Talk With Him.

“Hey. Why Did You attacked me last Week?” I asked To Him
He Said on the same moment: “Because Your Destiny Is Going To Change. And I Needed To Catch Your Attention. If I didn’t It. You Probably wouldn’t be here talking with me right?”

I replied: “Yeah. I Guess. But. What Is Going To Change by the way?”
He Told me with whispers: “Soon You’ll Discover By Your Self.”
Then He Went out Of My Vision.
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Re: After My Fake Death ~

Postby James » August 31st, 2010, 5:02 am

“Chapter three : Worst Nightmares of all.”

I Was There. On The Same Place that Timon and Pumbaa found me.
I was Tired. I Had a Bad Day.
My Eyes Were Slowly Closing.
I Was about to sleep.
When I did. Was the worst night that I Ever had.
I Was seeing destruction. People suffering. And I Just Couldn’t Move.
There Were a Small Group of Lioness. And They Were Dying by attacks of hyenas and on the top of a mountain. There was a lion. Laughing at all that was happening.
I Only Could See His Eyes. And Hear His Laughs..
After A Little While. I Woke Up And Went To Have some water.
Then I saw The Moon. And sat Down to See.
Hours passed and stayed there.
And I saw The same Baboon.
He came to me.

“Bad Night?” He Said.
“Yeah. I Think So. I had a Bad Dream. Destruction. Blood. And I Don’t Even Know Why. I Don’t Have dreams like that for years.” I said With my Head low.

“It’s Beginning.” He Said Starting to walk.
“What Is Beggining?” I Asked Him.
“You’ll know soon enough”

I Kept walking beside him ”˜cause I got more question to him.

“Why Am I Having those nightmares?”
He Said: “Something Is About To Happen Soon. And…you are a part of it. Wanting or not.”

I stopped Walking.
“What Is About to Happen?”

“You Have to discover by yourself. It’s your destiny.”

Then He Went out of view again.
I Was Worry with that dreams. Worry about What Was Going To Happen.
Worry If That could turn To Reality.

Soon I Went Home to Have some sleep. I was Tired. I Could Not Sleep because the nightmare. I Was About To Fall On The Ground Soon. So I Gone the faster I could.
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Re: After My Fake Death ~

Postby James » August 31st, 2010, 5:03 am

“Chapter Four: And The Nightmares only grows.”

Sleepless nights I had. And I’ve Could Not Pass the day cause I didn’t have energy. I Was Exhausted. And with all of those nightmares I felt depressed.
I was growing. However worries grown too.
I was almost An adult Lion. Was Getting Strong.
But I Was Afraid of those dreams.
Some Nights I Had The Same Dream. And it was gettint intense. More Blood on the ground. Sometimes it came on my paws. Kill after Kill. And That Evil Laugh echoing In my head.
I needed to do something. Quickly, or I would get mad, and more depressed.

I Was spending my day searching for aswers.
And Having those nightmares night after night.
My Body needed to rest. But I Could Not Stop.
After Some weeks. I was down on the ground. My Muscles were punishing me.
That hurted a lot. With The Fall Of the Night. I Slept.

And The same Bad Dream came again. However, there was a difference.
I Saw The Lion. On A Big Rock. And He was with a bad smile.
The Trees was burning out. There was no water or food. And everything just looked wort than the last dream.
I Heard together with the laughs, screams of pain. I Only could Heard The Sound. Of Death.

I awake with Timon and Pumbaa throwing water on my face.

“Are You allright Simba?” Pumbaa asked with a worried face.
“Yeah. Sure.” I replied trying to disguise.
“C’mon. What Happened? We Could See You moving while you sleep.” Timon Said looking at me.

“Only a Bad Dreams Guys. Only A Bad Dream. No Need To Worry.” I Said Looking to they.

“Are You sure?” They Asked.
“Yeah. As I Said. No Need To Worry.” I said Looking to the ground with my head low.

Then They Moved Out Of the cave that I was.
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Re: After My Fake Death ~

Postby James » August 31st, 2010, 5:03 am

“Chapter Five: End’s Near.”

I Was Grown. I Could Feel it.
I Was An Adult. Walking aimlessly by the forest. When I saw A Familiar Face.
A Face that I didn’t see for years.

I Sitted Down And Said: Hey. Can You Come Here please?

Then A Baboon came down of the tree.

“There Was a Long Time, right?” He Said Smiling.
“Yeah. I Guess.” I Replied.
“So. Did You Discovered what your dreams means?” He asked looking to me.
“No. They Only Get Worse.” I Said Looking a little sad.
“Don’t Worry. The End Is Near. Soon those nightmares will stop. Trust Me.” He said putting his hands on my shoulder.
“Thanks.” I said Looking better.
“By the Way. They Won’t stop by now. What can I Do? I’m Exhausted. I Can’t sleep.” I asked.

“You Can’t Do Nothing but wait. Patience young Lion. Soon. Things Will Get Better.” He said starting to walpking again.

This Time I Let Him Walk Alone.
And Made My Way Back To The Cave.
On the way. I Heard Growls and screams.
The Voice was familiar.
Was Timon And Pumbaa. Without Loosing time. I Ran To they.
I Jumped And Hit a Lioness. We Fought But In The End. She Let me in the Ground.
I looked Deep On Her eyes. She Was Breathing Hard.

“Nala?” I Exclaimed.

She got off me in the same moment.

“Is Really You?” I asked surprised.

“ Who Are you?” She asked confuse.

“It’s Me….Simba” I Said.

“Simba?” She Was Surprised.

I Nodded.

We Both Were Very surprised. And In That Moment I was Very…Very Happy.

I Guess She Was too happy like I was.
Questions and Questions. Happiness. Then Timon jumped between us.

"Hey, What’s going On Here?!" He asked Looking Surprised.

"Timon, this is Nala, she's my best friend!" I said explaining everything to him.

Then After That, I introduced Pumbaa to Nala.

But Timon still confuse.

"How do ya do... Whoa whoa whoa, time out!”
“ Let me get this strait. You know her, she knows you. But she wants to eat him. Did I miss something?!?!" He said Breathing Hard.

I’ve asked to him to get calm. And He did it.
Nala Asked To Talk alone with me.
So I asked to the guys move out for a while.

After They Moved, Nala got a little upset.

"What? What is it?" I asked to her.

"It's like your back from the dead. You don't know how much this will mean to everyone... What it means to me." She answered.

"Hey, it's okay."

"I've really missed you." She said as She nuzzled me.

"I've missed you too." I nuzzled she back.

There Was A Beauty Night. And I Was Falling in Love as the time passed by. We Were walking though the forest. Talking all Night Long.

"Isn't this a great place?" I asked Looking around.

She said that it was beautiful But she doesn’t understand why I didn’t returned to the pride lands being alive all this time.

I’ve explained that I had to live my own life, and it was great, I was lying. But I Could Do Nothing. Or she Would move away from me.

She said all the horrible things that were happening to pride lands. I was Horrified. At The Same Time I’ve remembered my nightmares.

She tried to convince me to go back and take my place as the King.
After all of she word. I Said: "You know you're starting to sound like my father.".

But She Replied: "Good, at least one of us does."

In That moment, I Get Angry.

"Listen, you think you can just show up and tell me how to live my life? You don't even know what I've been through!" I Said Angry to her.

"I would if you just tell me!" she Said Back

"Forget it!" I Said Walking Away

"Fine!" she Said While I Was Walking Away from her.

I felt Confuse. And Started to Think. Questioning Myself.
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Re: After My Fake Death ~

Postby James » August 31st, 2010, 5:04 am

“Chapter Six: Answers coming.”

I was On A field. When Another Baboon appeared.
I asked Him To Stop Singing. But He Didn’t stopped, he just said that it would come back.

I started To Walk. He Just Followed Me.
After A Little argue. He Said: “You’re Mufasa’s son.”

He started to walk. I Was Surprised. And Started to walk after him.

In The End. I Ran After Him Trough The Trees. We Were next to a lagoon. And He Told Me To Look To The Water. I did expecting my father. But That Was Just Me. As I told Him.

He asked me to look with more attention. Then I’ve seen what he means.

After that, my father came. After a Long Time I Saw Him Again. He Told Me Things that I’ve must hear.

He Gave Me Once More Advices. And I Felt A Little Better. Part Of My Mental confusion Went Away. One more time. I felt a little peace.
Then That Baboon Came And Started to talk with me.

Now The Things Were Getting clear on my head. I Knew What I’ve Must do.
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Re: After My Fake Death ~

Postby James » August 31st, 2010, 5:04 am

“Chapter Seven: And The End Begins”

I Ran away From the Oasis. My Way Was Definited. I was going to meet the End of the Pain. I was going to Confront My Past.

I Finally Was On Pride Lads. I was over a rock. Looking The Entire Pride Destructed.
Out Of Water. Out Of Food.
Soon I’ve heard Nala asking to wait.

She was talking with me about how horrible it was. I was Horrified about everything I’ve seen. And Heard From Her. I couldn’t believe in what she said when we was at the oasis. But, now, was different.

I Was Going To Fight For My Pride. And She Told Me That She Was Going To Fight Too.

I said That I Could Be Dangerous. But She Said : “ I laugh in the face of danger”
Memories came on my mind. And Made Me Smile. I Had My Old Friend at all. Timon and Pumbaa. That Made Me Happy too.
They Were going to fight with us.

We Walked away. Going On The Way Of The Pride Rock.

Our First Thing to Do. Was To Pass The Hyenas.
But we Don’t Had A Plan. So We Needed To Improve.
Timon Questioned what was the plan. Then I said: Live Bait.
He Accept On his innocence but after a while he said: “Hey!”
I’ve made him accept. But He Questioned what he was going to do. “What do You want Me to Do? Dress The Drag And Dance The Hula?!”
That Was Really funny to see. Was Hilarious. But By The Way.
We Passed The Hyenas. And I Told To Nala To Find My Mother…And Rally the lionesses. She Went Out to Do what I’ve asked.
When I looked all the lionesses…and the lion, I’ve remembered my nightmares. The Destruction…the lion laughing, lionesses diying. And All The Things was getting clear.
The Nightmares…were tolding me what would happen.
I Went to find scar.
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Re: After My Fake Death ~

Postby James » August 31st, 2010, 5:05 am

“Chapter Eight: Take Back What Belongs To us, and Gave Back life to our pride”

After That Flashback, I Knew What I’ve had to do.
But I’ve Heard Scar Calls My Mother Name.
They argued With Each Other. And That Monster Hit My Mother.
Was Enough for me. I Walked down a rock that gave me access to the pride rock.
And Checked if my mother was fine.
My Mom and scar thinked that I was Mufasa. But I’ve explained everything.

He started to talk. And I Was Getting Angry. I was Just about to Hip his face. But He started to talk again.

He Mentioned My Father’s death. And He Blamed Me For the Same.
I assumed the fault, and I could see every single lion face…looking at me. Impressed.

“Murderer” He Exclaimed.
I Was Worry, and he was walking on my direction, and I was walking back.
I Falled and grabbed on the pride rock.
A Thunder falled from the sky, starting a fire.

Then The Real Murderer Confessed the truth.

I Jumped On Him.

“Tell Them The Truth.” I Said With Anger Running on my blood.

When He Said “I Killed Mufasa”

The Hyenas came to attack me. But I was Not Alone.
My friends And Family came to help Me.
On The First opportunity, I’ve run after scar.
He was on the top of the pride rock.

We Fought and in the end of all I won.

A Strong Rain Started to fall From the sky.
And The Fire Slowly was fading away. I Walked down the pride rock. And After a Long Time. I felt Peace Again. I Knew that everythin was going to be fine.
I Finally saw my mother. And after All of those years. I Hugged her. And Next Nala.
I’ve felt the love and happiness on they. On The Entire Pride.

Soon the Hafiki called me, and I knew what to do.
I Walked over the pride rock. And Roared. The Pride Roared With Me.
I Became The New King. The right King.

After That. I’ve Married With Nala. And We had our cubs.

A New Era Begun, a better one for me, a better one for all. A Era Of Happiness And Peace, without pain. For Everyone.
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Re: After My Fake Death ~

Postby James » August 31st, 2010, 5:11 am

Well, that's it my friends...comment :3
As I Said, I Readed "Nala, The Story Of A Broken Heart" Very Nice Fan Fic.
"Traitors and Tyrants" I'm Reading, but it seems to be a really great Fan fic. It Have a Really nice context.
And I'll Be Posting More soon, I Need To Read It xD
Thanks For Reading.
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Re: After My Fake Death ~

Postby WildSimba » August 31st, 2010, 5:32 am

Dude, you can't just edit your first post instead of extending the whole page with a bunch of seperate ones? You only started this story 30 minutes ago, usually the time to bump with a new chapter like that is after a few days, and no one's replyed.

Otherwise, seems interesting, I'll read it.
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