"Lost Rogue" by Australian Chaos (PG-13)

[AustralianChaos]

Interesting theory, whistler...but we'll just have to wait and see, won't we?

Chapter 11 is now up, and whistler, it may actually answer part of your theory already!

[KiarasMate]

Very nice new chapters you've added in here AC. ^^ Both were quite enjoyable in their own right and keeps the story moving along at a nice pace. ^^ Can't say that the turn of events in Chapter 10 were very shocking, as that's sort of what I was expecting but you did a wonderful job portraying the emotion and relevance of it all. Chapter 11 was a little more informative and definitely leaves a few more questions lingering in my mind. ^^

No new constructive criticism to add in, but you still might want to give your work another proof-read, just to pick out the few mistakes that SpellCheck won't alert you of. :) Aside from that though, you're doing an amazing job with this Fan Fic and I look forward to the next installment whenever you get it up my friend. :)

[AustralianChaos]

Chapter 12 is up!

And to everyone who leaves feedback...I may not reply to them, in order to lower the risk of having to double-post when a new chapter comes along...

...but know that I DO read them, and I appreciate every syllable you put down to tell me how I'm doing!

[QueenRalexia]

Aww Tanga is not a bad guy is he

[Arani]

Wow, this is a very good story! I am a new members and will be posting stuff too. Keep up the great work Chaos!

[XeaxlXV]

Dang, I gotta say, I love this fanfic Chaos! I can't wait for chapter 13 to come out, and I'm probably gonna keep myself looking for it so I can read it when it does come out.

[KiarasMate]

Wonderful new chapter as always AC. ^^ A little more info leaked about Tanga's past and a very enjoyable chapter over all. :) Same compliments and same little knit-picks as per usual but I still think this story is coming out swimmingly and I can't wait for more. :) Keep up the marvelous work my friend. ^^

[AustralianChaos]

Thanks for all the wonderful comments, everyone! It stuff like this that keeps me writing!

Speaking of which...Chapter 13 is FINALLY up after 10 long days. Go find out what trouble Tanga's gotten himself into this time!

[KiarasMate]

Hmm, interesting chapter you've posted here AC. ^^ Wasn't expecting to see the hyenas again and it's a little odd that Juhudi was able to sneak away from his mother, especially so soon after what had transpired in chapter 12, but still, a great chapter nonetheless. ^^ Same compliments and minor knit-picks as always so keep up the marvelous work my friend. :)

[Arani]

Wow, chapter 13 was great! I love how you put Juhudi into the mix. And the hyena's really topped it off. I can't wait for chapter 14!