[OPEN] Friends Forever?

[Simbadacub]

SM: sure

Shumba: i dont know, can you show me an example of your RP skills?

[shumba]

well i ant dun a role play befor but here we go's

it was a cold and stormy nite,everything was asleep or so it seems.
There was a pride of lion out to take over the pridelands,christa was
was the qween of this pride she is a tall and powerful lioness that has
golden,brown fur and a scar on her noes "keep up your going to slow" she rawd ever so loudly,
so they all started to move quicker.christa heard some thing coming from behind,it was her daughter
named iver.Iver was a kind hearted lion with perfect blue eyes"what do you want" sead her mother"i dont see y we need to do this we have got lots of land alredy"she sead back to here mum.Christa just ignore her and carried on,she could see that the pridelands where just over that hill.


hope this is good enough for you
pwweeesss let me know

[Nakisisa]

It was a cold and stormy night, everything was asleep or so it seemed. There was a pride of lion out to take over the pride lands, Christa was the queen of this pride she is a tall and powerful lioness that has
golden, brown fur and a scar on her nose "keep up, your going to slow" she roared ever so loudly, so they all started to move quicker. Christa heard some thing coming from behind, it was her daughter named Iver. Iver was a kind hearted lion with perfect blue eyes "what do you want" said Christa "I don’t see why we need to do this. We have got lots of land already" Iver said back to here mum. Christa just ignore her and carried on, she could see that the pride lands where just over that hill.
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Please, Please, Please refrain from using Text speak, it gets very hard, and tiresome to read

[shumba]

ok will do
but is it eney gd or not
soz about all the text i was in a rush

[Nakisisa]

Any Good?

it's alright, but please, as much as possible, try to talk in standard English

[shumba]

ok will do my best

[Nakisisa]

Thank you, just wait for SDC to see the post you put up

[VitanisMate]

Shumba we are not trying to be mean man we are just trying to help you out here okay?

I saw the text and you need to put apostrophes before the quotes and need to capitalize the first letter inside the quote. Other than that it looks fine.

[shumba]

Thanks, i dont think you are being mean VM.
i will take in what you have sead and try my best ok

[vitanithelioness]

can i be sarabi? and tama? (she is a cub in the comics in the pridelands during mufasa's rule)