Asani

Asani

Postby Rathon » May 11th, 2010, 12:40 am

Name: Asani (Rebellious)
Species: Lion
Gender: Male
Age: Teen (? I don't know the age of a teen-aged lion... ._.)
Pride: Current: None Past: Weloco Pride
Personality: He is a contradiction to himself. He is quiet, standoffish, and doesn't enjoy being around new people. However, he can also be spontaneous, random, and weird.It all depends on his mood at the time. He is typically depressed or sad, and likes to wander around and on different Pride's lands, not careing who they belong to. On the flip-side of this, his temper is one for the books. When angered to the striking point, which is hard to do because he is also a very tolerant being, he tends to loose control over his actions and strike at what ever is near him. He values few things any more, but the two things he values most is Family and friends, because he has been without both for a long time. Very few things anger him, but the few that do are pretty major. He is angered quickest if attacked for no reason (pretty obvious). He is also angered if he feels he is being treated unjustly. The quickest way to get him to snap, however; is to attack someone he cares for or holds to a higher status (friends/family). If he in confronted, hostile or other wise, he will try and find a way out without using violence, but will attack if necessary.
Description: Lean but muscular. Best suited for fast weak attacks, rather than slow strong ones. His fur is dark brown/black and his mane is black with a red streak at the top. His claws are all white, except for one black one on his right front foot. This claw is the sharpest and does the most damage. There is a long white scar running down his left side, which is a result of a fight from when he was younger. (explained in history)
History: When Asani was still a cub, his mother and father were exiled from their pride for "Treason". The real reason was that the Pride Leader, Kuratou, had wanted Asani's mother Talim, but his father, Furoku, beat him to it. Kuratou had hated them from then on. He waited until they had a cub to exile them because he though that his would deal them the most pain. He then made up false charges and told them to leave, but they refused. A fight ensued. Asani took refuge in a nearby tree and watched as his mother and father fought off many of Kuratou's other lion and lioness subjects. They were beaten by sheer numbers. Asani continued to hide, but was eventually found for Kuratou who quickly tried to kill him by slashing him nose to tail and tossing him on the ground. Asani passed out from the pain. He awoke a few days later to find buzzards too close for comfort, and his wound healed. He still doesn't know who or what saved him, but the scar reminds him of it and the death of his mother and father, everyday. He now roams Pride Land to Pride Land searching for food and shelter.
Picture: I would love to...but I can't draw.

So will this work? This is my first animal character, feedback welcomed...
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Re: Asani

Postby Mike » May 11th, 2010, 12:57 am

Well thought out character =) I think he'll fit in here just fine ;)
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Re: Asani

Postby Rathon » May 11th, 2010, 12:58 am

Thanks...now all I need is some where to put him x_x
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Re: Asani

Postby YFWE » May 11th, 2010, 1:09 am

Very good character you've got here, Austin! I love all the detail you've put into it; this is definitely not a half-hearted character description, which we sometimes see too often. It's evident that you've put a lot of thought into him!

As for where to put him, just find an RP or start one up yourself with him! Simple as that! :)
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Re: Asani

Postby Rathon » May 11th, 2010, 1:15 am

Actually...very little thought on my part went into him aside from the name >.> I just let my fingers to the thinking for me...and as for an RP...I don't see any that are open in intermediate or advanced, unless I'm blind, which is possible, and I don't plan on making one till I get more comfortable here >_>, but thanks for the compliment ^-^
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Re: Asani

Postby YFWE » May 11th, 2010, 1:21 am

Hey, you put enough thought into him that you were able to type up this long of a description! That's mainly what I meant. :) Good luck with any future RPs! Heck, if you need one, just ask someone if they'll do a private RP with you and I'm sure you'll find someone willing to. ^^
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Re: Asani

Postby Rathon » May 11th, 2010, 1:29 am

Heh, yea....I suppose so. >.<" The trouble is finding someone...
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Re: Asani

Postby YFWE » May 11th, 2010, 1:33 am

Just ask around once you get comfortable! We all tend to be pretty friendly. :)
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Re: Asani

Postby Rathon » May 11th, 2010, 1:45 am

Ok, is there a way to tell RPers from non-RPers?
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Re: Asani

Postby YFWE » May 11th, 2010, 1:59 am

At the bottom of the front page of the MLK forum, you'll see a "Legend" that has all the groups here... click on Role-Players and that'll give you most everyone! :)
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