Kopa and Vitani

Kopa and Vitani

Postby Wereberess » April 1st, 2010, 3:56 am

Zira stalked up to her young daughter, who was sulking on a nearby rock. After Kopa had everheard them talking, finding out Scar was indeed Vitani's father, he left her and the pridelands. Kiara was the heir, Vitani was his love, and since she was gone...why stick around?
"Forget about him Vitani." Zira said to her daughter. "Their are more important matters to be dealt with." But Vitani didn't do or say anything to let her mother know she had obeyed the command. "Look Vitani," Zira started, looking her daughter in the eyes. "This is a sign. Those Loyal to Scar can never return to the Pridelands by any means unless Simba is gone." Vitani turned away from Zira's eyes. "And Kopa is no different." Vitani turned to her mother in shock. "What do you mean?" "Must I go into detail Vitani? What happened to the kniving daughter i raised?" Zira asked circling Vitani. "He destroyed you. Just like Simba destroyed my mate Scar. I intend to get Simba back. I think you should do the same." "But i could never-" "There you go again. Showing weakness. With weakness comes death." Zira growled, scaring Vitani onto her back like a frightened cub. "If there's one thing your father taught me it's to Never say Never." Vitani got to her paws and watched her mother leave.
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"Mother!" A young adult Kovu ran up to Zira in a panic. "Vitani's gone!" Zira proccessed this then smirked. "She will return." he assured her son, passing by him casually.
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Vitani had left her pride that night using her tracking skills to find her old lover. A paw print, the scents left behind from him spraying a bush, and a few hairs from his pelt and mane told her her he was here and sure enough Kopa's sihloutte was in her sights. With a silent growl she stalked towards her childhood friend. He heard her pawsteps and turned. "Vitani?" he asked in astonishment. "I thought i told you we were through." "You did." She nodded. "And we are." "So what do you -" A clawed paw across the face answered his question. "Vitani! What the-!" But his sentance was cut short as Vitani suffocated him like he was just another wildebeest.



Kopa and Vitani?

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Re: Kopa and Vitani

Postby TheWhistlerify » April 3rd, 2010, 10:03 pm

Everything happens too fast but I really liked it!
Even though I was expecting them to love eachother again.

Please continue
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Re: Kopa and Vitani

Postby Wereberess » April 4th, 2010, 7:11 pm

[quote="TheWhistlerify"]Everything happens too fast but I really liked it!
Even though I was expecting them to love eachother again.

Please continue[/quote]

Well...Seeing as I believe Scar is Vitani's father and Kopa is Simba's son them coupling would be incest.

So i don't support the pairing. At all.
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Re: Kopa and Vitani

Postby Simbadacub » April 4th, 2010, 7:16 pm

ok then? o.o" err i guess good fanfic lol
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Re: Kopa and Vitani

Postby QueenRalexia » April 12th, 2010, 4:30 am

I think its great Wereberess, I hope you continue and i look forward to reading some more :)
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