by Azdgari » March 28th, 2010, 6:24 pm
Jess-- The Zira thing was, yes, the attack of the dreaded typo. =P Thanks for pointing it out, and for the kind words. =]
Princess Kiara--Yeah, in hindsight that would've probably made a bit more sense. I guess I got the idea it was kind of a father-child thing just because of the way it had been done in the movies, but I guess Kiara would probably have had more experience. Either way, I'd intended for her to be the one who ends up talking more deeply about with Kivu about his place in the kingdom as things progress, so I think it'll work out in the end. Hopefully. Thanks for the crit! =D
Kina-- Thanks! Means a lot to me. =]
New chapter up. It was written mostly while I was very sleepy or very stressed, and I'm not as happy with it as the rest, but hey, what can you do. =P
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