Kopa, and Zenaku's offworld stories

Kopa, and Zenaku's offworld stories

Postby roxas13 » March 20th, 2010, 12:48 am

Ch 0.01
The Dragoons

Simba was off patrolling the pridelands and the lionnesses where hunting. This left Zenaku alone with Kopa.

So Kopa, said Zenaku,you ever heard of the Dragoons.
No, can you tell me about them. Kopa said in a boring voice but he was intrerested.
Why are you so down about a storry that you have not heard? said Zenaku. It is bound to be more adventorous than the old baboons stories.
''Hey'' said Rifeeky entering the cave. I heard that.
Ok, Kopa if you listen to these storres of mine I will teach you a few magic tecniques. said the white lion.
I hope it is not dark magick.Said the baboon.
Do you want a demonstration? Asked Zenaku.
If it is proof, yes. Said the baboon.
I got up walked out of the cave the others fallowed. As soon as they were paying atention. he said to them turning around he said, watch, and learn. The white lion began glowing a bright gold.
it caused the cub and the baboon to sheild their eyes. within an instint the light subsided.
in this form one is able to weild power beyond mortals and this is what I will teach you. said Zenaku who was now a bi-ped creature 5 claws on top and botom. But first the stories must be heard. I went into the den and they fallowed yet again.
He produced a holographic image of a world called Indines. .....To be continued.
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Re: Kopa, and Zenaku's offworld stories

Postby KiarasMate » March 20th, 2010, 5:54 am

Hmm, interesting Fan Fic you've started here roxas13. Not much to comment on as of yet although there's a few things you might want to work on for future chapters. The biggest issue I think that would help your writing is if you proof-read your work to find mistakes that maybe spellcheck didn't find. Starting off the story the way you did is a little confusing as well. you might want to try introducing your characters a little more. The chapter is a bit short too for my likings but that's just me. Anyways, you have a very vivid imagination it seems so I'm sure this story will turn out nicely and I'll be keeping an eye on this Fan Fic. Keep up the nice work my friend. ^^
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Re: Kopa, and Zenaku's offworld stories

Postby roxas13 » March 20th, 2010, 11:46 pm

Ch 0.02
Hellina prission
I've apeared out of nowhere in a bi-ped armored wolf form. A man named Dart Feld, another man named Lavitz Slambert, and a girl named Shana where fighting near the exit in Hellina prission aginst a huge but stuby and strong man. I that the head warden? The red one(Dart) asked Lavitz.
Yes, Replied Lavitz. His name is Fruegal, he is so bad even the people of his own country fear him.
So you are the red one acting as a prince. Stated Fruegal.
Shana. I said geting her atention (A black hood cloak covered me so she could not see who I was).
Take these two out of here, I'll hold them off.
the girl did not hezitateto do so and she taped Dart on the soulder.
How can we....? He began.
"Go" I said.
Don't wory about me. I added taking off my cloak to reveal my self.
I wont let them...began Fruegal.
Whoa big guy, you still have to deal with me first.
Tut such a wimp tormented Fruegal...... To be continued
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Re: Kopa, and Zenaku's offworld stories

Postby roxas13 » March 21st, 2010, 12:12 am

Ch 0.03
Zenaku the White armored wolf-beast vs Fruegal.
So you think you can take us all onalone. Said Fruegal. Hey, senoir warden. "Show him a lesson."
A man with a iron plator (no eye sockets) dashed at me, I quickly pulled out my long crecent shaped wheapon (I call the creacent blade) And counteracted The wardens atack,
and he then said to me holding an item, what seemed to look like fire in his hand he threw it , I may as well take you to the underworld with me"
Oh please, like thats going to hapen. I retorted. The flames was all around me, But I felt ... nothing.
The warden disapeared.
"Since I know that does not work I'll take You on my self" said Fruegal.
Sory, maybe next time. I Countered. "Hiden Mist jutsu" I suronded my self in mist and disapeared.
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Re: Kopa, and Zenaku's offworld stories

Postby roxas13 » July 14th, 2010, 5:55 pm

ch o.o4
the Small Chat in the Shack
I walked into a shack only to find Dart finishing a story. I did not want to scare them and there was no dore, so i knockedon the wall to asure them of my arival, they all turned to look at me. So how did your getaway go ? I asked with a smirk showing .
it went smothly thanks to you thanks to you, replied dart. Would you like me to train you further? I asked. I'm truly sorry about your parents, I added. You know something dont you? asked Dart. That will have to be toldl later, I responded. what are you, asked Shana (quivering a little in fear). I am an org but I am also a wolf, I replied. it is my wolf side that enables me to have a haeart, because orgs dont have hearts and therefor can not bleed, I added. so you are on our side right?, Asked Shana smiling. Yes that is corect little lady,.I answered. Zenaku paused the story and looked outside. It's geting late Kopa I will have to cntinue tomorow, said Zenaku tranforming back into his lion form (which he previously saved kopa in ). Intresting, said Refiki scratching his head in intrest. For the first time, I have to agree with the monkey, said Kopa. Will we get to meet your friends ? asked Nala.
"Your Magesty" , when where did you get back, asked Zenaku quikly turning to face the Queen. ive been here since you started the story. so far im iterested. I'm glad to hear that ... he was cut off. Please jest call me Nala, your Magesty Makes me feal .... old.
As you wish young one, said Zenaku. Hey, I am an adult, said Nala. And I am over three thousand years old, I stated. Kopa's jaw droped open only to have his father (who just got back from patrooling the prideland). You don't look like it, said Simba.You still look like a young adult male. That is because I am an Imortal. said Zenaku. How did you achive imortality?, asked Refiki.Iwas born with it, answered Zenaku. I have more stories in a molicule than you have in your entire body, Zenaku added.
Ok which brings us back to Nala's question, yes you will meet my friends, Zenaku said. but the rest of the stry must be told because, I have more friends. Now I beleive that I should sleep with your son seeing the fact that I am imortal , Zenaku stated. I gues we should trust you on this one, said Simba. But I must warn you he is hard to put to to bed. Zenaku began to change back into his true form. Wow,i did'nt know you could do that, said Simba. This is my true form, said Zenaku, I dond normaly show this form to creatures such as yourselves. Zenaku got out a crecent shaped dager/flute and started to play a melody( what Zenaku from power rangers wildforce played on his flute when looking into the past of Marick right after he was cursed when he faught the other former gaurdians of the earth). Kopa was soon asleep and when Zenaku saw that he was he put the crecent dager/flute and then turned back in to his lion form, then he curled up around Kopa, which he responded to by opening his eyes slightly and smiled then closed his eyes and snugled up closer to Zenaku and the two fell into a good nights sleep.
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Re: Kopa, and Zenaku's offworld stories

Postby roxas13 » December 11th, 2010, 10:29 pm

Ch.05 Watching Zenaku Hunt

Zenaku, said Kopa nudging him.
Yes, I'm awake, said Zenaku setting down his flute and opening his eyes. I've always been awake.
How can you always be awake? aske Kopa.
I've been asleep for 3,000 years, replied Zenaku. 3,000 years is enough sleep for anyone.
Would you continue were you left off? asked Kopa.
After I round up something something to eat, replied Zenaku. It will only take up to ten minutes, would you like to watch me hunt?
Shure, replied Kopa.
There are two conditions, said Zenaku.
Name them, said Kopa.
One, this must be okay with your parents, stated Zenaku. Two, you must keep quiet and hidden in the grass.
Kopa then went over to and nudeged his father first.
Huh, said Simba lazily while lifting his head. What is it Kopa?
Dad, can I go with Zenaku and watch him hunt? asked Kopa.
I can somon a gaurd to watch him if you would like, stated Zenaku (who knew Kopa Had wanted to learn new techniqes.
Well if you have the power to I gues it's fine with me, said Simba. I'm off duty today, so I think I Sould come along too.
Simba walks over to Nala and gives Her a nudge.
Mmm.... ,Says Nala opening her eyes. Simba, what is it?
Kopa wants to go watch our guest hunt, stated Simba. I'm going to go with him as well, zazu sugested I have a day off. Oh, and yesterday I met a rougue white lion Named Kito who proved himself worthy to me last evening.
Go ahead, said Nala who fell back to sleep.
I gues thats a yes, comented Zenaku. after cuting his hand with his dager and drawing a sumoning circle he yelled; Sumoning Jutsu: Hitaki Kakashi
A man who looked slightly handsome and young with white hair holding a book apeared.
What is it this time Zenaku? Asked the man plainly as he closed the book. I was just in the middle of reading the poket book versoin of The Chronicles of Narnia: the Magician's Nephew.
Ahh, Kakashi I see you've finaly gotten into fantasy books, said Zenaku. Let me get to the point I need you to keep an eye on this lioness (he indicated to Nalla). We may need you longer than you think, Zenaku paused examening his saurigan (sory if I speled I forgot Or don't know how to spell it). Is that a new saurigaun?
Why yes it is, stated Kakashi.
I'd like to hear about it, after I show these two how I Hunt that is sid Zenaku indicating to Kopa and Simba.
So go already time doesn't wait, if you know what I mean, said Kakashi.
"Right" said Zenaku before jetting out the cave entrence realy fast but slow enough for the lions to keep up with him.

After five minutes of running at the speed of a lion zenaku spoted some antilope and stoped. He did not crouch for the antalope did not see him, and the antilope did not see him becase he had the power of stealth at his disposal.

Your Magisty, please stay hidden, Zenaku said kindly. Watch and learn, Dont forget to keep your eyes peeled and focusedd on my tactcs. I will not use my weapons, I will use my claws.

With massive speed Zenaku ran at the heard and as he ran the antalope heard began to run but they could not tell where the preditor was because his armor was shining a blinding gold (similar to the lights of orian but more masive in size)


Through Simba's and Kopa's eyes


As Zenaku burned with the light of over 9,000 supernovas, all they could do is lay their with their mouthes hanging open.



Back main Point


Zenaku dashed from antalope to antalope instaintly. He had killed one old (yet healthy) male antalope, one middle aged healthy male antalope, and miidle aged female antalope all in less than 15 seconds with only his claws. He had them hung over in his shoulders.

How did you....started Simba and Kopa at the same time Butt they were cut off By the white anthro beast.
Lights of Orian, a very powerfull techniqe and I also cobined it with a technique called solar flare I just used the techniques together not to increase any of my statuses but to blind my pray while I rushed at them at maximum speed. it only lasts for !0 seconds but it's very usefull, informed Zenaku.

Is the Lights of Orion ability obtainabe? asked Simba.

Not, to a lion, stated Zenaku.

So you are telling us we cant learn this ability? asked Simba.

No, I'm not saying that you cant learn it you need to go thrugh a simple training course to become anthromorphic you wont have skin if your thinking about being turned into humans, confermed Zenaku. Let me show you what I mean.

Zenaku takes off his mask and his armor untli the only thing he was wairing was his leather drape.

This, is what I mean anthromorphic, stated Zenaku.

So, we get to keep our forms but we live 2 lgs have an extra claw on each forpaw and hind legs, said Simba. and about the your majesty thing I'm getting tired of it just call Me Simba.

Yes, y.... I mean Simba, said Zenaku.

Meanwhile in the den, Nala was waking from her sleep. after yawning and strecing then opening her eyes she noticed creature she's never seen before. This creature was sitting something she has never seen befpfore (a sofa).

Hello, Kakashi greets. My name is Kakashi Hataki.

Nala looks at Kakash with a look of distrust.

Don't be like that, said Kakashi. Zenaku sent me and told me to keep an eye on you.

when Nala heard that name, her look of distrust changed to one of happyness and as she ran at him and jumed up onto the sofa.

Hi, she said. My name is Nala.



At that moment Zenaku and the lions came in and slung over Zenaku's shoulders were three antalope. Zenaku jently set the antalope down.

So Nala your awake, and I see you've met Kakashi. said Zenaku. I've killed these for you and the others.

So..., said Nala.

So, what? asked Zenaku.

Are you going to take the first bite it's your kill, said Nala.

If that's okay with you but I have to give Kakashi some meet so he can cook it, said Zenaku.

Fine by me, can I ask why he needs to cook it? asked Nala.

Kakashi is human, said Zenaku. His digestive systym works diferently.

Zenaku took a peice of meat with his teath and took off the extra and tossed it to Kakashi. Then Sarabi and Saraphina came it with the lionesses with several wildabeast.

everyone then ate and listened to what Simba had to say about Zenaku killing 3 wildabeasts in about 5 seconds. They were astonished hearing this and knowing that they have not seen him before he converted himself back to his white lion form and introduced himself to them.

............to be continued..........
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Re: Kopa, and Zenaku's offworld stories

Postby roxas13 » December 22nd, 2010, 10:58 pm

ch .06
Letting Zenaku Join the Quest

Pt 1



After the pride had eaten and only the king his wife, Zenaku, Sirabi, Sarafina, Kopa, Kito, and Vitani were left, Zenaku spoke up; who would like to hear the rest of the story. Zenaku then looked at Kopa and smiled then said holding up a paw pointing at Vitani; you like her, don't you? Kopa then blushed and wisperedin his ear, "yes", I do.
Zenku then said; dont worry I won't tell, unless you Wan't me to. I never lie, and my words are always beleived.


Now, said Zenaku walking into the center of the den. Before I continue the story, I must reveil a secret to all of you. All eyes drifted to the center of the room. Truth is, I am not realy a lion. Zenaku glowed with a Holy light as he revealed his true form.
After the light subsided Kito and the lionesses (except Nala) gasped.

Sir, asked Vitani. What are you?
I, Said Zenaku. Am an Org.
What's an Org? asked Sarafina.
A creature without a heart, Orgs capable of causing a massive destruction, informed Zenaku.
Then why arn't you? asked Sarabi.
Ahhh... good question young one, Zenaku complimented. The answer is I'm half wolf.
Why did you just calll me young one? asked Sarabi blushing. I'm one of the oldest lionesses in this pride.
That is because he is over 3,000 years old mother, Simba stated.



............... to be contiued...............
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Re: Kopa, and Zenaku's offworld stories

Postby roxas13 » December 23rd, 2010, 12:22 am

Ch. 06

Leting Zenaku Join the Quest

Pt 2

Zenaku's Brother


How can this be true? asked Sarafina. How is that even possible?
How can I tell you, said Simba. He said he would reveal that in time.
Indeed, Complimented Zenaku. And that time is now. Many Millenia ago my brother who looks exactly like me except for the collor, was cursed by an evil witch when I was away, bound her soul with him transforming him into a cursed mask, 3,000 years later I came back hearing from one of my sisters that my brother has not come back from a temple he was suposed to be back 2,999 years ago and all she found was a mask which she handed to me. I then ran to the temple after she described it.
After I reached the temple and went inside, I found a Giant square tomb and slid its covver off. I saw a set (did not Count how many) of black weapons inside in their own molds and in the middle I found a mold that his mask seemed to fit in perfectly. Before I put the mak in the mold I kissed the mask and said as I closed the Covver; may you rest in peace. I then waved my hand as I faced the entrance to leave and said; may you be found by one that is pure of heart, I then lefr knowing verry well that the magic I sealed the tomb with would make it impossible for anyone except the one described.

Another Millenia pased and there was a battle going on and I used a technique to make me unnoticeable and I watched a battle unwind between an Org who calls himself Master Org and five human beings that called themselves the gardians of the earth. I noticed the presence of a man and turned to see that he was watching the battle between them. Master Org was defeated soon and grew to an unimadginable hight. That is when I thoght: I can take him, but this is not my battle.
Just then the warriors went to take care of the other Orgs (or that is what I thought)
I then thought: they're going to lose If I don't help.
then a Giant machanicle humanoid Being (made of five machanicle Animals) apeared in a flash of light and tryed to take on master org. As they clashed the young man thought I've got to help them, it is the only way.

He rushed to and into the temple till he found what he was looking for and removed thee lid then rushed out of the temple mask in hand and as the giant being fell he thought; no!
He then put on the mask and yelled as he held his hand out; Evil Spirit of the Wolf..... Fill Me With Absolute Power! he was ingulfed by blue flames and darker blue flames shot out of his raised hand as three mechanicle animals aperedand combined a head grew out of the top of the boddy and extendet a few inches and a horn grew from its forhead. The man then juped into the newly formed creature placed a crecent dager in the middle of a crescent pool and exclaimed;
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Re: Kopa, and Zenaku's offworld stories

Postby roxas13 » December 23rd, 2010, 1:27 am

Ch .06
Letting Zenaku Join the Quest

Pt 3

Falll of Master Org




The warrior then exclaimed; Predazord awaken.

The warrior then yelled as he moved his hands in a certain motion; Preda wave!
A wave of energy then shot out of the middle animal's mouth at a massive speed and hit mater org right on completely obliterating him.
Then something horrible hapened the warrior transformed into the image of my brother and turning visible I Exclaimed; hold on brother! as he came gliding out of the giant creacher as it disapered.
The form a my Brother then said in the warriors voice; I'm not your Brother. My Name is Merric.
he then ran into the forest and hid for a day only to come back the next to ask and then begged the leader to destroy him.
Destroy me, Merric pleaded.
No, said the Gaurdian in the middle. We shall not harm a friend

I watched as he continued to beg for them to destroy him.

I cant hold it back much longer, Merric pleaded cluching the head of the form. this mask it's making me Evil, soon it will turn me against you making me want to destroy you......
he grunted try to regain controll
Then the eyes compleatly changed to those of my brother and he unclenched his head and stood up straght as his weapon apeared in his hand and he cahrged at the gaurdians.

the leader dodged his atack by rolling under him and when he rose to full hight he slashed him in the back with his sabre and sparks flew one after another the others fallowed (as my brother grunted/growled). once he was to his knees and the Gaurdians surounded him in the shape of what they represented they slamed there sabres into the ground and a chasm of light surounded him as he growled one last time and fell into a sleep in a black coffin and a lid covered him.

Before walking away the leader said; rest in peace, my friend.
i then stepped out of my hiding place wth my weapon in hand and walked over to were the coffin was, as I did he noticed I looked like the monster (except for the collor).

Stop right there,he saidputting his hand on my shoulder. "You do look like him"
Hey guys he yelled to his fellow Guardians who were not far off and herried to the spot where he was.

................................... to be continued..............
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Re: Kopa, and Zenaku's offworld stories

Postby roxas13 » December 31st, 2010, 11:54 pm

Ch. 06 continued

the Gaudians' Misunderstandig






I was looking straght into the eyeyes of the lead gaurdiab while his friends surouded him they were calm at first, that is until they realised my horn.

Your an Org, stated one of the gaurdians who noticed I had shed a tear.
How can you have fealings.

I'm part wolf, I stated. that is all you need to know.
You took my brother! (draws Crescent blade it is the same as his brothers except it is white) Now I'm goin take you!

They do nothing and I stop as the leader opens his mouth and says; If you wish to go through a Long slimber like him then we will not hezitate to do so but if you do not you will be put on the Animerium and will gaurd the princes as well as gain powers beyond reckening, 1,000 years from now.

I withdrew my blade (to Anamus Knows where)and said; I except the offer. Before I do, will my brother be himself when he awakes.

The lead Gaurdian puts his hand on my shoulder and said; only time will tell.

I was then lead to a lake and on the lake there was a island the lean gaurdian gave me three crystals in a crescent shaped dager and we walked onto the Animerium. The gaurdians pointed at the island and I took a step on the lake and to my suprise I was on top of the watter. then I slowly walked on slowly until I reached the very top and when I was beyond the mountains I felt something similer to an earth quake as the island rose into the air. 1,000 years passed and I found I had the power to create things, worlds, dimensions here on earth and I did. I also found I could change my apearance completely at will and had much more I had to learn in the future.

3,000 years passed and the princess awoken I could feel it from the world/dimention I was at I instantly transported myself to where the princes was waking with a yawn.

The princess turned to look around sensing my presence and said: I know theres someone there. I entered her sleeping chamber.
and she screamed.

Do not be alarmed princes, I said in a calm manner.

Are you any thing like the demon who tried to destroy the humans 3,000 years ago? she asked.

No, .... no, I had a choice to be treated like my brother and gaurding you and I chose to gaurd you, now that you are awake we must wait for the chosen. I think I sense one now.

We came out of a well and there was a startled female.

Who are you, she asked.

I am Princess Shayla and this is the Animerium, said the Princess. We have been waiting for you Taylor Earheart.

We? asked Taylor looking at a yellow crystal with an eagle init which screatched in delight. Wait who's he

He is my personal gaurd,..... what did you say your name was again, asked Shayla.

I did not, my apollogies your highness my name is Zenaku, I said with a slight bow.

........................ to be continued...................
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