The Legend Of The Shadow

[YFWE]

w00t two updates in one day!

That was another good chapter! Nuka and his big mouth, haha... certainly sets the stage for a pretty interesting scene, though. Will they be caught when they go investigate this "private talk"? Hopefully we'll find out soon enough!

[KiarasMate]

Again, another nice part to your story that you've added here KK. Wasn't expecting to see Nuka in this Fan Fic so that was a nice surprise. Anyways, again, keep up the awesome work buddy and I look forward to the next installment.

[KingKivuli]

Zira's Plot

Ahead of the others, Nuka was making haste towards the outlands, a desolate place, no animals lived there and the members of the pride had no reason to visit either. As Nuka approached the boarder, he was met by a small gap leading down to river, the only way across was a fallen tree. The crazy young lion slowed his pace and started to cross slowly. As he did, a sudden hissing came from below him. He looked, only to be greeted with he eyes of a bunch of hungry crocodiles 'Nice crocodiles, dont mind me hehe..' He continued his walk over to the outlands

One safely on the other side, Nuka picked up his pace again headed deeper into the outlanders. Eventually he came across an open area. Zira was there, with Kovu and Vitani under her. She was also surrounded by a large group of the pride. Nuka dashed towards them 'Hi mother!' He yelled, dashing towards them, only to trip up and skid to a halt. Kovu and Tani found it amusing 'Nuka, you finally made it. We an now begin, our plan to destroy Simba will come true'

Meanwhile Kivuli and his friends were still hot on the trail of Nuka. They had reached the river crossing, greeted by the same hissing crocodiles 'So whos going first?' asked Ashur. Kivuli stepped up straight away and crossed the tree with no difficulty. Kokota went next, then Ashur, only Zizi remained. She stepped up, and crossed slowly abut carefully. Towards the end however, part of the tree under her back paw causing her to slip and have to hold on for her life 'Zi!!!' yelled Kivui as he jumped back on the log to help. The crocodiles were tryign to get her, jumping out the water, snapping at Zizi's body.

Kivuli finally reached Zizi and held out his paw to her. Without hesitation she grabbed it and was pulled up to safety, and off the tree. Kivuli walked to her and gave her a hug 'Oh god Zi are you ok?' She stood shaking a little 'Im fine just a bit shaken thats all, im ok to go on' Kivuli let go of her and nodded 'Lets not waste time' The group headed off again, following Nuka's scent. It led them straight to the meeting. There was a small bush and a few rocks nearby, which they used as cover to listen to Zira's plot

'The time for action is now!' She yelled 'Simba killed Scar, the true king of us all. That so called king couldnt run pack of sleeping zebra, never mind a pride. We are its true leaders, we must take over and avenge our king' The group was all started snickering, laughing, letting out small roars in agreement 'Now heres the plan, when we head back, begin to spread yourselves across the pride. I will distract Simba, and when I give the word, we will strike, taking down those who do not follow our rule' Nuka had remained silent until know and spoke up 'Mother, what about Kivuli and his friends, they are strong and might stop us' Zira thought for a moment as her clan looked on waiting for a reply 'He will be an issue. Take out the rest of the pride first, then all focus on attacking him, he cant take us all'

As Zira went on, Kivuli spoke to his friends 'Darn it she is planning something. Im sorry i doubted you Zi, I should have listened' She looked at him with a cunning smile on her face 'Maybe you should take a piece of Zira's advice and listen to us girls more often' Kivuli just chuckled a little before listening in more. A cool breeze went past, kicking up the dust that covered the entire place. Everyone shielded their eyes so not to become blinded, but the troubles didnt end there. Ashur got some caught up his nose. He tried to resist but in the end it was pointless, as he let out a loud sneeze. Zira jumped round facing their direction 'Who is there, get out here now'

The group of friends looked on, with fear in their eyes 'Kivuli, what do we do?' Asked Kokota. Zira was marching over with her gang in tow 'The only thing we can do. RUN!!' And so they did. The four of them began running as fast as they could to get away 'After them! Kill them all!' howled Zira, as her group ran after Kivuli. They reached the crossing, there was no time for being careful, they all crossed at once and at speed. Thank fully the tree held up but one of Zira's pack was beginning to cross over and almost had them. When the lioness was close, Kivuli didnt think twice, he swung his paw, knocking her off the tree into the river, giving the crocs a fresh lunch 'Come on keep moving they are still coming' yelled Kivuli as the group ran back to priderock

[KiarasMate]

Darn you with your cliffhanger endings KK. lol. Well, it's good to see a bit of action finally. Don't get lazy with your proof reading now though buddy. ^^ Other than that though, another enjoyable chapter and I look forward to the next installment. Keep up the awesome work KK. ^^

[YFWE]

Sorry this took me so long to get around to reading. But man, things sure are getting crazy now! Action is always wonderful and I'm sure the next chapter or two or three will be chock-full of it. Can't wait to read 'em. Keep up the good work!

[KingKivuli]

Bloody Revenge

Kivuli and his friends kept running, the wind blitzing past their faces, trying to get home. Ashur looked over his shoulder, Zira's group were hot on their tails 'Kivuli we cant outrun them, what should we do?' Kivuli looked back to see what Ashur was on about 'Darn it we cant let them get back to priderock we must defend it' Kivuli thought fast for the best option 'Zi run ahead get your father as fast as you can, we will stay back and hold them off' Zizi looked at him and nodded before dashing aheads leaving the others running at the slower pace 'Ok guys, we got to slow them down, but dont kill them they are still part of the pride you got that?' Ashur and Kokota showed their approval

The trio suddenly grinned to a halt and did a complete one eighty, before charging back into Zira's horde. Ashur went left, catching the attention of four members. He was the weakest in the trio so opted for a more defensive type of fighting. Ducks, dodges and dives, and every so often tripping his enemies up to keep them locked in the battle through anger and hate. Kokota had gone right, he had bigger problems with seven on his tail. His fighting style was simple, keep his eyes open and when a chance presented itself, strike at his foes to disable their movement. It didnt take long for a few of the attackers to collapse with destroyed paws and legs.

Kivuli charged straight forward, straight to Zira, and her four body guards who stepped up to defend their mistress. Kivuli made light work of them. They were such flimsy fighters, the friends sparring sessions had kept them sharp aware and fit, while these aggressors were clearly lacking in ability. A few smacks to the head and bites to the legs knocked them either out or down. Kivuli now approached Zira, his claws and fangs were painted with fresh blood 'Looks like your plan is over Zira, nice try to get me all at once but you wont beat me and friends' A fire burned in his eyes ready to go 'Ill get you Kivuli! Nuka stay with the cubs' Zira charged at Kivuli

He readied himself just in case, but what threat would Zira give him really. That soon became clear. She wasnt the strongest but Zira still had excellent speed, Kivuli was keeping on his toes to avoid the deadly attacks, whilst trying to make contact himself. He hit as few times, as did she Leaving marks over all their bodies and fur sent flying in the air. It seemed close, until had a bad moment. The speed of the fight was taking its toll. Zira saw her chance, she swiped him with a left paw across his face, knocked to the teen down. Blood flew off and splatter on the lush green grass 'Well Kivuli i guess i win, your useless like your mother' Zira just made a bad move, Kivuli suddenly jumped up, blood streaming down his right cheek, and rage in his eyes 'ILL SHOW YOU USELESS!!!!!' He charging in with more zeal and fury that before, managing to match Zira blow for blow

Meanwhile Zizi had reached the main den, hoping Simba had returned. She was in luck, the king was resting inside. As she entered, Simba saw his daughter puffing and panting away from her run, and instantly ran over 'Zi are you ok? What happened? Wheres Kivuli and the others?' Zizi quickly caught recovered and spoke as soon as possible 'Nuka told Kivuli there was a private meeting. We followed him to the outlands. Zira was there. She was planning to kill you in Scars name. Kivuli and the others are fighting back those loyal to Zira so i could make it here' A look of fear came over Simba's face. Just when he found peace it was broken. The kings roar echoed over priderock and the pride flocked to him 'Zi you stay here and rest we will handle this' He took off with haste once Zizi showed him the way to the battle field

The trio of friends were beginning to tire out fast, their moves were becoming sloppy, and reactions slowing down. Those that Kivuli and Kokota had knocked down, went through the pain, and most got back on their feet to fight. However there was not one body there without damage. Kivuli had even taken a nice bite out of Zira's ear, which was now running with blood along with his cheek. 'Give up Kivuli your mine' Zira advanced slowly, a manic look in her eyes. Kivuli, Kokota and Ashur held their ground 'If we die here, at we protected our loved ones for as long as possible, and i will at least take you with me Zira, this will end' Kivuli knew this was a bold statement, he was tired.

Just as Kivuli was about to collapse he heard a roar behind him. Simba had made it with the rest of the pride and quickly they surrounded Zira, ending the blood bath. Simba stepped up and looked at both sides. Each were beaten and worn 'Everyone back to Priderock, now!' He demanded. They set off, at a steady pace so not to lose the wounded and hurt over high speeds. Zira and Kivuli exchanged looks and somehow Kivuli knew this wasnt over

[KiarasMate]

Awesome new chapter KK. ^^ Wish all your chapters were this long. lol. ^^ j/k buddy. Good action and nice story progression. Aside from the few usual gripes, a very enjoyable addition to your Fan Fic and I look forward to the next installment. ^^ Keep up the great work my friend.

[YFWE]

Aw man, nice chapter! Very action-oriented, which is just great as always. Kivuli also uttered probably one of the more badass lines I've read in a fanfic here as well. "I'll show you useless!" Awww heeeeeck yeah, someone's gonna get messed up when you hear that! Keep up the good work.

[KingKivuli]

ok i want to say a few things. first off thanks to KM and YFWE for their long lasting continued support for my fanfic, you guys have been awesome. Another thanks to SimbasMate for the loan of Ashur, Moka for Kokota and NM for Mila they are a great bunch of characters and do help with the story so much, you have no idea

finally one last thing. comments people i know that KM are YFWE are not my only fan members dont be shy in making a post and giving feedback. i dont mind if its positive or negative, each will help me improve what im writing and inspire/push me to do more

thanks again to those awesome members listed, i hope i dont let you down

[KingKivuli]

Caught in an Act

The large pride group made their way home. No one spoke a word. Simba led the way, Zira and her band of rebels were behind, followed by Kivuli, Ashur and Kokota, with some of the other pride members surrounding the sides. After a short while, they had all returned to the main den, Simba turned round 'All of you get out of here. Zira I will speak with you later don't leave priderock' Simba entered the den. The pride dispersed, going off in different directions. Ashur and Kokota ran off round the side to the den. Kivuli was about to follow his friends until Zira called to stop him

'Don't think your going anywhere Kivuli, I want a word with you' Kivuli turned to face her. He was ready for a fight just in case 'Ive got nothing to say to you, you want to take over my home, your fighting for the memory of the Scar, a sworn enemy of mine. He killed my mother, hurt my friends, and damn near well destroyed the pridelands cause he was in charge. What makes you think I want to let you get away with everything and take over, causing the pain once more' Zira chuckled and advanced toward Kivuli, circling around him, teasing him 'Your so short sighted Kivuli, i don't want to rule the pridelands' Kivuli looked at her menacing eyes, confused 'Then what is your goal?' She stopped in front of him and glared back 'I want Simba dead, but i cant run the pridelands, I want you to become the king'

At this point Simba was about to exit the den when he glimpsed Zira and Kivuli. He held back round the corner and in ear shot of what was being said. Kivuli was the next to speak 'You want me to be king? why?' Zira came close, muzzle to muzzle 'Your strong Kivuli, you command respect even at your own age. Ill admit that before i wasn't sure if i could trust you. However i know what fire burns in your heart. You wish to challenge Simba, you want to win. Why stop there when you can become the king?' Kivuli stared at her almost speechless 'I dont....but...king...i don't know'

Zira began walking away from him to the tip of priderock 'Think about it Kivuli, you know deep down its what you desire' She left him. He was in a state of shock. He never thought of challenging Simba for the kingship. Zira's offer stunned him. She was right though. The pride respected him and would more than likely follow his lead, that went for Zira's bunch too. Still, he didn't know. It was a hard decision for him, could he really do it? As Kivuli pondered Simba emerged from the cave. He let out a mighty roar. Within moments the pride began to gather. Kivuli looked up only to see Simba glaring straight at him. The teens heart was in his throat. He had no idea what would happen next