Marizzle wrote:I'm trying to finish an one-shot fanfic, but I can't...I'm struggling with grammar.
If anyone's able to help me, which form is correct?Spoiler: show
Technically, with this wording, the second one is correct and not the first one--that said, I think the reworded sentence Rollo suggested probably gets your point across better.
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I'm whining about the fact that I have to go to bed soon cos work is so early and long tomorrow.



This is actually the first fanfic I'm writing in English, so I'm trying my best, but I love to push myself to the limit. The reworded sentence was indeed great and made me rethink multiple other sentences. 












