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[FeatheredSeclude]

Alright, so I decided I wanted to try some more animating. This is what I've gotten throughout my night.
Not bad I'll say, but my proportions need serious work, lol
But I basically got what I wanted. This animation I plan on making into a finished product, I'm also working with a friend on another set of animations, those are likely going to be on Tumblr, or my YouTube when they get to a finishing point.

Was honestly a lot of fun so far. Tedious, but very enjoyable. I had this vision of Rien being knocked down, and recovering from it like you see, and then sitting and blinking with a smile at the camera, why I don't know, just something I wanted to try animating. What do you guys think so far?

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All work is [c] 1Ts38n 2016
Rien [c] 1Ts38n 2016

[Cheeony]

Sweeetnesss

[FeatheredSeclude]

Thanks!

[Labatis]

Really nice animation, Timestones!

Just a little suggestion, but maybe Rien should breathe a bit in the animation before turning to the camera, sitting, and smiling. It kind of slows it all down, which I think this may need. It's a little too fast, in my opinion. I'm in no way an expert in animation, though.

I'd love to see more from you soon!

[FeatheredSeclude]

Thanks!

I just may do that to be honest.
Plus I think he needs more movement when he pushes up off the ground, he like barely comes off the ground, and I do think he should hover higher and a little longer. So odds are, yeah, I'll be adding in more frames, and will try the breath frames, that'll be three-six frames odds are.
I'm no expert myself. His proportions change through the whole thing, I need to work on keep them roughly the same size.

Likewise. XD