Maybe it's me, but I can't help but think that she's being so ungrateful. I give her a script to check so that her character's personality is intact for the story I'm writing, she approves it. I write and post two chapters, have them up for a
month, and then when she finally gets round to reading them the only thing she has to say is a nit-picky criticism - something I ALREADY checked for when I spent her the script, which she approved!

If someone did this for my characters, and I knew they were going to the bother of checking the characterization was okay, I'd be a lot more thankful for that person than this. Why do I bother?