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[Cheeony]

*BLOOD WARNING*

[Labatis]

Well, there goes another scientist. One less person to pay!

*gives Damian a cookie* Good boy, Damian!

[Cheeony]

*cracks up* hahaha *takes the cookie and gives it to Damian* *he looks at it confused at what he is suppose to do with it*

[FeatheredSeclude]

He should eat it, wouldn't his stomach be thrilled. XD

Just had to add in some 2 cents, XD

[Cheeony]

lol

[FeatheredSeclude]

Kinda served the scientist right for torturing him all that time. Seemed justified to me. But that wouldn't sit well on me either. Don't I personally could kill anything. If I had to kill any animal I was going to eat, I'd be a veggie person, more than I am already. I like dem veggies over meat any day. Loves the broccoli! XD

Had nothing to with the page much, but whatever. Still very interested in the comic. Like how it stays more towards the family friendly side, mild language and blood to me are not bad. When it relevant, then put in, just not over kill it.
Like Tangled, when Gothel stabs Flyn. The blood there was relevant. Wasn't excessive, but it got the point across. Which is what this page does.
As for the language, I do think "hell" would have worked a little better, it would add more urgency to the situation in my opinion.
Dreamworks makes family friendly movies, minus Penguins of Madagascar where they use the term, and it seems appropriate to me. It had some humour/urgency, depending on how it was used. And doing stuff where the char almost cusses is always a funny treat, like Holy ship!

Doing some critiquing there. Sorry if you are NOT a fan the language or anything was offensive. Was in the mood for it, so why not?

[Cheeony]

lol *loves reading your large commenting*
I wanted to use that word in that sentence but decided to not too because I try hard to not use any language.

[FeatheredSeclude]

To me, larger comment=more info=better=happy face

Ahh, I see what you mean. Was giving a personal preference. Nice to see someone who really isn't a fan of language.