[mlkfaa] - 1Timestones38n's Album -> 02-15-2014_WM_Here I St

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Second completed pic in a single day, sorcery?!
Here is Marell and Jovial in a cool. I don't have that song I was working on done yet, but I'll include lyrics/poem below everything. I'll add a link to the song after I finish it.
I went for something simple here, yet to me it's got good contrast. Though I am in a predicament. I am tempted to colour the white trim on Marell black or a darker brown? Curious what you guys think I should do? And if you noticed in the title. My bro (RicoMissleKid) and myself are wanting to make a series type thing out of these two chars. He'll be voicing Marell, and I'll voice Jovial. It's intended to be a very comedic type set up. The pair torturing the other for the most part is basically all there is to it so far.
Though if we do go through with it, it's going to be some time before anything video will be posted. I have some ideas, as does he. We'll be trying to put it together, and try some form of animation.
That's roughly it.

Rate, favourite, comment please!
Link to song:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zYQIxb5U-zk
Song Download Link:
http://www.mediafire.com/download/vwt2n ... +Stand.mp3

Artwork, Marell, Jovial, Ahh Hail No! [c] 1Ts38n 2015
Here's that poem:

Here I stand, uncertain,
Uncertain whether I make the right choice,
whereas I believe I want something,
Yet here I stand if this something is right,
Uncertain if it is really in disguise.

Here I stand, confused,
Confused if I should obey my concern,
or if this concern is doubt, or fear,
Yet here I stand in a crossroad with identity,
An identity that cries.

Here I stand, with seclusion of thoughts,
Thoughts that drive most over the edge,
A place I see myself stepping closer to,
I stand at the edge, fearing failure,
Yet I know here stands a chance.

Here I stand, tipping to the edge,
Tipping may be the right choice,
Freedom's price grows stronger everyday,
I may leap for freedom,
Yet I stand, with one string hanging.

Now here I stand, realizing this string,
This string of loyalty,
It brings both joy and sorrow,
Love and hate,
Yet here I hold, my loyalty.

So here I stand today, clear minded.

[Iri]

I love their expressions. <3

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Thanks a lot!