Battle

Battle

Postby Iri » May 13th, 2014, 2:40 am

The battle raged and raged. The thunder boomed and lightning shot across the sky. Busajja was barking orders at his rogues as he fought ruthlessly.
"Unsheathe your claws, Dhakiya! Etana, claw his chest! Tindo, use your weight against him! Monifa, Isibanda, fight as a pair! Safari and Ianthinus, drive your enemies back into the bushes! Do whatever you can to defeat your opponents!" he bellowed.
Imithi, Arida, and Mimea were using their herbs to help treat the injured ones. They were driving any enemies that tried to take their herbs away.
"Retreat!" the lead lioness of the enemy pride yowled.
The rogues pursued the retreating lionesses until the enemies were completely gone. Arida, Imithi, and Mimea started to clean up their scattered herbs. The rogues were stretching and flexing their claws. The fight had been brutal.
Just as they prepared to leave, another huge group of lionesses rushed down the hill. Most of the lionesses were the ones in the previous battle, but there were many more. Busajja bared his teeth. "Attack, my rogue combatants, attack!"
The rogues plunged into battle once more, spitting insults and threats at their attackers. Busajja fought off a few lionesses and bounded over to Kurami. "Kurami," he muttered in the blind lioness's ear. "Gather some of your friends and go raid the cub den. Then run back to camp. Do not come back to the fight. I will see you after the battle."
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- Titus Andromedon

"Titus, cherish this time. One day you'll wake up and you'll say, 'Who's that old woman in the mirror?' And then she'll punch you, and you'll say, 'That's not a mirror, that's an open window'."
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Re: Battle

Postby Adimu » May 13th, 2014, 2:48 pm

Hey, why don't you just make a fanfiction!? So that everyone can view your amazing story in one! It's really good and you should become an author someday. :)
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Re: Battle

Postby lionobsession » May 13th, 2014, 6:18 pm

I agree with Adimu! They way you write these stories is truly amazing!
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Re: Battle

Postby Iri » May 13th, 2014, 9:32 pm

Thank you for your kind words, Adimu. c:
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Re: Battle

Postby Iri » May 13th, 2014, 9:32 pm

Thanks, lionobsession! That means a lot. c':
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Re: Battle

Postby Kayo49 » May 15th, 2014, 12:50 am

Wow! I love all the detail! I can just picture it! Even when I'm not looking at your amazing picture!
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Re: Battle

Postby Iri » May 15th, 2014, 1:04 am

Haha, thank you for your nice words, Kayo! <3
I think I'll actually draw a picture to go along with this.
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