The fox and the girl

The fox and the girl

Postby Oliviatc » November 25th, 2009, 7:54 pm

For everyone who wanted to hear the story i made for some kids at primary school 8-) :) ;) :D

Once upon a time there was a girl called Rose.She lived with her mum and her dad.Next to her house there was a woods.In the woods there lived a fox.The fox was orange and white with a black nose.Rose went outside to play in the woods.She saw the fox.The fox went to its den and Rose followed the fox.When they got to the fox's den the fox spotted Rose.He just looked at her.Rose said,"Hello."
The fox just stared back and then Rose said,"Why are you staring at me?"
She ran off home before the fox could ansewer.The next day Rose went back to the woods and the fox saw her and ran to her.Rose thought to take the fox to her house and said to the fox "Do you want to see my den?"
The fox looked at Rose and blinked.They went to Rose's house but when the fox came in Rose's mum said," What you doing with a fox?"
Rose told her mum the story about how she had met the fox.Rose and the fox went up stairs.The fox didnt like being in a house.He ran around her bedroom,so Rose took the fox downstairs and let it go outside.The fox ran away.She went back to the woods to see the fox but Rose couldn't find him.She went back everyday to trt abd find her friend but the fox was no where to be seen.Rose never saw the fox again.
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Re: The fox and the girl

Postby Oliviatc » November 28th, 2009, 7:19 pm

:D
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Re: The fox and the girl

Postby SilverSimba01 » November 29th, 2009, 2:19 am

WOW this is a very nice story, good work
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Re: The fox and the girl

Postby Oliviatc » November 29th, 2009, 1:18 pm

thanks silversimba
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