Poetry!

[Avakule05]

I got this idea from another fourm I used to be a member of ^^ hopefully it's allowed.
Ok well this is just a space where you can type your own poetry and people could comment on it and it'll grow up to a katchillion pages!!!!!!! MUAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! lol
Um since this is the first post I'd better start...

Cool is the wind that blows into my face
shivers run down my spine
my eyes have opened and I notice
the sky is free, open and blue
the sun is majestic and the trees are bare
their branches block the sunlight
and throw shade here and there
the air is slient, there is no chirping of birdies today
just the noise of traffic and barking dogs.
The puddles are shallow and frosty
and the leaves dance on the floor
since this is almost everything I observe
I shall write no more

[RayCat]

Wow, that really paints a picture! Great work Avakule05 ^^

[jonemartin]

I have found some more information about this poem.- More lines, but it is still incomplete.

'I'm breathing on the window pane.

I've drawn a house and a chimney pot

I've drawn a man and children too

An apple and a toasting fork

And someone who looks just like you

And Grandma sitting in the rain.