A TLK One Shot.
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Re: A TLK One Shot.
by Jiirani » December 29th, 2010, 1:34 am
Nicely done :3 I've never heard of a story like this before. I'm curious to why Simba would disown Kopa though, but it does make sense. Good plot, i liked it, just a few errors as stated in the comments above me that I won't go into because i shan't have enough time, but all in all a great One Shot Flip! I really enjoyed reading it :3
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Re: A TLK One Shot.
by K0PA » January 24th, 2011, 2:20 pm
I like it. it is good to see a story that Kopa is not killed.Just to say i am sos for dubal posting my post did not show up
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Re: A TLK One Shot.
by FlipMode » January 27th, 2011, 10:41 am
Thank you Jiirani, I am surprised yet glad this is still receiving such praise!
Hehe you may be waiting a short while for that my friend, I usually write things like this when I just get an urge or free time to write and that does not happen too often. I am working on a fan fic based off this idea, but I could not say when it will be finished and up for reading...
K0PA wrote:do more pleas souper cool idear :D
Hehe you may be waiting a short while for that my friend, I usually write things like this when I just get an urge or free time to write and that does not happen too often. I am working on a fan fic based off this idea, but I could not say when it will be finished and up for reading...
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Re: A TLK One Shot.
by changa » February 25th, 2011, 7:09 am
Ok. Great story. I'm sorry, I just had to point this out: Lions don't hug. Not really. They just nuzzle. I'm a grammar freak, but I guess I didn't notice anything cuz I'm used to innernet-speak. But 9.5 out of 10!
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Re: A TLK One Shot.
by Daenerys » February 25th, 2011, 7:18 am
Wow! That was great! Please keep going! I have to admit your spelling and punctuation were kind of sloppy.
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