The new danger in the land

[Adofo]

(Okay)

Vitani: .....I know you won't go through with it.....
Her voice was filled with sadness

[TheWhistlerify]

Kopa frowned. "Yes I will." He stood up. "I'll see you tomorrow."

[Adofo]

Vitani just laid there and cried. The last time she heard him say that was the last time she saw him before he left.

(I know that last sentence I kinda controlled Kopa but it just really seemed to be a great little detail! But i can removed that if you want)

[TheWhistlerify]

(I don't see how he could have said that if she was in exile when he left.)

Almost 4 days have passed and Kopa still hasn't returned. Siari walked over to her mother and lay down between her paws. "Mommy... Where's daddy?"

[Adofo]

(Just go with it for the dramatic effect)

Vitani: I....I don't know! Siari, stay here! Mommy will be back with Daddy! I promise!
She gave her a kiss on the head and took off towards the mountain.

[TheWhistlerify]

Siari stayed in the den with a gloomy look on her face.

(Should Vitani go alone? She is pregnant...)

[Adofo]

(This is Vitani we're talking about. She'll be fine)

She's been looking all over the mountain for hours and she suddenly hears a slight moan on the wind. She followed it and found her mate on the ground.
Vitani: KOPA!!!!!

[TheWhistlerify]

Kopa slowly opened his eyes upon hearing Vitani's voice, a look of shock appearing on hia face when he really saw her. "Vitani?" he asked, his voice hoarse from the lack of water. He hasn't eaten or drunk anything for days. "I-I'm sorry I didn't make it in time..." It was clear that his leg was messed up but he seemed to only care ahout her rather than about his injury. "I found the flower, but..." he stared down at the ground. "It already dried up and died..."

[Adofo]

Vitani: ....You....you actually got it?!? ....I don't care! I shouldn't have made you do this!!!
She grabbed the flower and stuck it in his mane then carefully put him on her back.
Vitani: Hold on....i'll get you home!

[TheWhistlerify]

"Vitani, don't..." Kopa was bigger than Vitani was not to mention that she was pregnant. He tried to get off but he was too weak to do so.