Scattered: Til Dawn (Comic i made up)

[Tako]

Well making a new comic... Its called Scattered: Til Dawn. The characters featured are Jango, Kress, Helios, Cheyenne, Sharki, Tarko, and Gunner.
Here's the story so far!: ~

Through the calm, warm, jungle. You see a team of 5. They're all on the same side to fight the enemies. Well, also they are known as bounty hunters. The team leader is Jango. Jango is the big boss there, which you wouldn't want to mess with. His 4 team members are Kress, Sharki, Cheyenne, and Gunner. They're sharp as a machete. All of them have destiny to destroy the massive killer, Helios. Helios is cold-hearted, tight fisted, cruel, nasty, void guy. He is the problem of people being murdered. They've been trying to take him down for almost 3 years but, he is just to slippery to catch. But, they promise and promise to try to get him and treat him with his own medicine!! Helios has a partner named, Tarko. Tarko is a extremely nice guy but, Helios brainwashed him. (Cheyenne really likes Tarko) Team Machete is on a mission to be free from those dangers, they try until midnight has come or dawn has come...

Well? Is it good? c:

[Adofo]

I like it!

[Tako]

Thaaannkkkkk youuuuuu!!!! C:

[Adofo]

You're welcome! :3

[Tako]

:T

[Adofo]

:|

[Tako]

Ugh my feet hurt...

[Adofo]

Man my back hurts!

[Tako]

Cuz I just came from school, that's what's up.

[Adofo]

you did? what time is it there?