Adofo's Story Revisions started FINALLY!!!

[Adofo]

First of all I want to apologize, since I stopped posting chapters in Adofo's Untold Story and removed them for revisions almost 300 different views have been filled with nothing but disappointment with the only thing you can find is "Taken down for revisions" and "coming soon" WELL NO MORE!!!! I have finally gotten up off my lazy butt and started revising. Since it is so late where I am I only did Chapter 1 tonight, but tomorrow I will post more and more until the story is complete, from the sweet and caring intro to the heartbreaking and emotional ending! I promise!

Here is the story! ==> viewtopic.php?f=8&t=29650