(Poem)

[Nightstar75]

Yeah thats right, I can't think of a good title... But here
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But still through it all,
through the bloodshed
and cold hearts
through the gore
and anarchy
through life
and death
through the concept of vain
but mostly, through love
and loss
Do we finally learn,
people never really do change,
do they?
--

And to think I wrote that just as I typed..? Good or no? I wanted to write a poem too But I didn't know what to say >.<

[shadowdream]

this is really good. I love it

[CheetahCat]

Really nice job on that poem, Kirstin. Keep up the fabulous work! ^^

[SimbasMate]

Very emo. I love it though. It's amazing.

[Nightstar75]

shadowdream Thankyou deary ^^
TeenSimba Thanks Josh-san!! *hugs* ^^
SimbasMate WELL SM XD I am an emo kid and I think really depressing and dark-like, so =O Ummm, DUH XD I can't write happy poetry, just dark and emo. Haha. Thanks though <3

[MusicLion101]

Good stuff! however, it would have been more thought-provoking if you were more ambiguous about what the poem is truly about. Using metaphors is good for that kinda thing

[Nightstar75]

Haha, I know. But remember, I wrote this in 5 minutes. AND as I was typing. It had NO previous thought, and I was rushing because I had someone waiting on me. XD So, yeah. Thanks though. =3