Salida Del Sol~Sunrise & Angel's Wings

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Salida Del Sol~Sunrise & Angel's Wings

Postby DreamEater » November 21st, 2012, 10:19 pm

My two stories I came up with a little while back.
Here are the description to both:

Salida Del Sol~Sunrise:

Sajeev, a young man raised in a desert entitled Sun Spot, had recently been abandoned by his mother and his father died of cancer, and so Sajeev decided to set off on a journey to travel the world and see what awaits him at the end of the road. After travelling for several years, Sajeev hears word about his mother becoming pregnant with another man and finds the location of his mother. Arriving at her house he questions about her new child and she offers to give her daughter to Sajeev. His mother states her name is Rebekah and Sajeev immediately begins to love this child, now excepting her, Sajeev and his mother make a deal that after another year of travelling with her, Sajeev must return to his mother and give Rebekah back to her.

A whole year of travelling went by and Sajeev did not forget the deal he had made, Sajeev returns Rebekah to his mother, though after a long talk with Rebekah, Sajeev tells his mother that Rebekah wishes to continue to travel with him and he'd like to continue to travel with her as well, his mother lets him do so and Sajeev and Rebekah's adventure continues on.

Years had passed and Sajeev is now a well-built young adult and Rebekah a very out-going teenage girl, after days of practicing Sajeev and Rebekah try to master using the technique of ‘Mundo’ together, Mundo is a all-powerful attack that absorbs energy from every human, animal, plant, any living thing, and transfers the energy into an orb, though nothing has given them the right motivation to do so as of now.
Part 3 of Sajeev and Rebekah’s adventure follows the story of brother and sister travelling the unseen places of the world and discovering things no one would have ever assumed was possible, as they continue to teach themselves the ways of what they call “Hermano y Hermana Mundo”, a brother and sister’s world.

Angel's Wings:

Makaylah, a 16 year old girl, was born in the middle of a war, since she was not safe where she was her father transferred her to an orphanage, as he did he prayed, “May the angels watch over this child” and not long from then Makaylah was adopted by a young man named Lann, who was now her brother. As Makaylah grew up with Lann she began to think that he was an angel sent to watch over her and protect her from the growing danger of the war.

Lann brought Makaylah to believe in God and that the stars in the sky are angels who come down from Heaven at night to keep everybody safe, as Lann believes so himself. One late night, Makaylah walked outside of her home and appeared to see Lann standing at a hill with angel wings growing out of his back, he turned around and said to her…

“Come and find me once you spread your wings,” suddenly a large ray of white light shined down from the sky and carried Lann away. Confused, Makaylah could only watch her new brother be taken away from her and the sky close in, becoming nighttime again. Now longing for that very light, Makaylah sets out on a journey to find her brother, Lann. Now believing that it was the angels who took her brother away from her, Makaylah becomes angry with God and is soon infested with the awful power of hate and darkness. Makaylah begins her adventure, trying to forget everything Lann told her about the Heavens, though she is entirely unaware that angels are guiding her through the whole journey.

Those are both of my stories and I hope you like at least one of them.
This is a link to my Deviant art, http://realmofthedragonsii.deviantart.com/ I've uploaded a picture of Sajeev on there but not of anyone else just yet, sit tight...

If you have any questions about my stories feel free to ask about them, I'll be willing to answer.
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Re: Salida Del Sol~Sunrise & Angel's Wings

Postby Dark Huntress » November 22nd, 2012, 6:43 pm

Those are really interesting :) I like them a lot!
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Re: Salida Del Sol~Sunrise & Angel's Wings

Postby DreamEater » November 22nd, 2012, 7:06 pm

Oh, my, you have no idea how glad I am...

Thank you so much for taking the time to read this and actually like them, too.
I put more effort into them than you can imagine.

I'm going to be making a comic-like thing of them, too, I don't know if I'm just going to write the story on a document or actually draw the things...
If I draw the whole thing or not, you'll still get several pictures of the characters on my Deviant Art.

I've laready uploaded one of Sajeev, next wil probably be Sajeev and Rebekah.
To be honest, I'm not intirely sure what Makaylah and Lann look like just yet, but I'll get to it!
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Re: Salida Del Sol~Sunrise & Angel's Wings

Postby Dark Huntress » November 24th, 2012, 2:39 am

;) keep at it, it sounds really good. And the ideas are really special to me because I worship my older brother :)
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Re: Salida Del Sol~Sunrise & Angel's Wings

Postby DreamEater » November 24th, 2012, 4:39 am

I will cerainly keep at it, Wolf Girl.

I'm so glad you like the ideas, you don't know how much it means to me.
You worship your older brother?

I guess that's good, I really, really love brother-sister stories allot.
I also like father-daugther and mother-son stories, but I make those a little less.
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Re: Salida Del Sol~Sunrise & Angel's Wings

Postby Dark Huntress » November 24th, 2012, 4:07 pm

I've always looked up to him, I love it when we agree on stuff an like the same stuff, he's not exactly my role model, but he's awesome. Whenever I picture Jesus, I picture a more perfect, moreloving, nicer version of my older brother.
I like brother-sister stories the best, but I really enjoy father-daughter stories (me an my dad) and I like mother-son stories because I want lots of sons :)
And I'm glad you're keeping at it!!!
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