My Lion King Forum

bouncey · by **bouncey** » May 18th, 2011, 4:07 pm

this is a story of a purple spotted cat , bouncey. bouncey was dreaming peacefully, and this is when are story begins! '' mumm ! i love lazauza !'' she said , as she rubbed her belly. bouncey grabbed her toast , but then she saw the bee hive !, this was troblue ! she climbed , the big ,red , oak tree , she therw a walnut at it. BONG ! BANG ! the bee hive fell , and busted open. '' uh ,oh !'' bouncey told herslef , as she looked down. BUZZ ! BUZZ ! with the sound of bees in her ears , she ran for dear life ! she was conered , and she leaped in the river. her dream was interupted by vocies. '' wake up,little therp ! '' ''AHHHHHHH !'' she screamed. '' wake up ! '' the pink bouncey told her. then she left with kody . bouncey frowned. '' fine if she ruins my dreams then i'll ruin hers !'' but in order to ruin the pink bouncey's dream , bouncey would need a lot of help ! so, she went to her best friend , blackie. '' oh , it's you ! bouncey what do you want ? , this better not be one of those adventures ! '' she scoffed. blackie hated adventures , since the tresure adventure was chaotic ! '' no. it's not. i need help sneaking up on my sister ! '' bouncey told blackie !

WildSimba · by **WildSimba** » May 19th, 2011, 10:30 pm

Sorry, this is an english only forum.

bouncey · by **bouncey** » May 19th, 2011, 10:44 pm

umm , what ?

FlipMode · by **FlipMode** » May 19th, 2011, 10:57 pm

What he said was -
[quote]Sorry, this is an english only forum.[/quote]

Sorry but I can not follow that at all, it is just a mess of characters and even when I can read more than a line, the pacing is all over the place.