Criminal Minds ; Hostile

Criminal Minds ; Hostile

Postby Kopalover » February 16th, 2011, 1:18 pm

Amy Stiller, a highschool prom queen. Problem was, every girl was jealous. Every guy to. She was rich, beautiful, smart, and had everything. The school was on their knees trying to meet her needs. She got everything she ever wanted. Until this day.

Amy was in the school hallway, after school. Noone was there, until she heard noises coming from the hallways. She started running, her bleached blonde hair fell out of her ponytail she had up for cheerleading. Short-shorts riding up her legs as she ran down the hallways. She flicked her sweater off leaving it in the hallway. She turned every corner, her blue eyes were wide with adrenalin. A person arrived in the doorway wearing a black trench coat. She stopped and turned around, another person in a trnch coat arrived in the doorway. She turned back to the first person. He flung 2 blades from his sleaves. She gasped then the person threw the blades at her.


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"Amy Stiller. Murdered in John Penn State High School in the small town of Eastwood, Ontario." Aaron Hotchner ( well known as 'Hotch' ) said with no tone in his voice. Slapping a brown file folder on the long, black rectangle table, that Dr. Spencer Reid was reading the Spanish dictonary, Emily Prentiss was just finishing her coffee having a conversation with Derek Morgan. Penelope Garcia was just entering the room with David Rossi and Jennifer Jareau (Known as 'JJ'). "We need to get there fast. He could be only killing kids, and thats a prioraty." Hotch spoke again, with more tone in his voice.

Next thing you know it, the entire team is on the jet. "Well, judging by the way she's beaten, until you can't see who or what gender she is. The UnSub had a bad past. Most killers who have had bad past, tend to beat another person and blame them for their childhood, depending how bad the killer's past was, also depends how bad the UnSub will beat the victim." Dr.Reid stated with a scientific tone in his voice, sweeping his hair out of his eyes, also looking at the multiple pictures of the body. "Good job, Pretty-Boy." Derek Morgan stated, who was sitting across from Dr.Reid. Pretty-Boy is a nickname D.Morgan came up with. Ried being significantly younger then the rest of the team, Morgan also gave him the nickname 'baby'. Only used occasanally.
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